Twilight Sparkle was living a normal life in Canterlot. She had a loving Mother and Father, Two brothers whom she tolerated, and a group of friends she would die for.
But that was all taken away when a mysterious person shows her the reason behind her Utopia. Now she's on Equestria's Ten Most Wanted list.
Join her and her new group of friends as they fight to free their home from the tyrant it doesn't even know it has.
Based on the fan-art designs of Yatonokami.
Rated teen for some more mature images and themes.
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?
Mind = fucked.
Also, I'd watch out for using the right tense.
W8!!! What?.... Chrysalis?
I see ...... you throw us off with that 'C' in the letter and with all descriptions of golden armor and stuff. Ha Neat
You use this several times when I think you mean 'straight'. In the two cases I saw, you were describing hair.
And a surprise twist ending!
And a chance to use the Twist emoji!
7674786 *Missing facehoof emoji* thanks for pointing that out, I'll take care of it.
Well, this seal the deal! I'll keep my eye on this story!
Nothing like a good story you forget for then all of the sudden to appear in your tracking list.
More please
Shame this was discontinued.