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Silver Malice


Creativity is always a leap of faith. You're faced with a blank page, blank easel, or an empty stage--Julia Cameron. Now let's see some PONIES!

Comments ( 18 )

OK ok this story is getting very interesting to read it has my full attention now keep up the good work update more soon. :twilightsmile:

Aww poor Chryssi... anyway, awesome start! I'm looking forward to read more :D

7532115 I should get the first chapter out tonight or early tomorrow, thank you for your support.

I haven't read many fics about the queen's recovery. The only other one was a crossover with the Beast Wars.
Thanks for doing this.

She was a queen and she was on the hunt. And the gods have mercy (or envy) on the hunted.

RUN JUST RUN

7567097 Do you remember the name of that fic?

Nice start, I like your style.

7577370 I didn't draw it. An artist friend of mine on Deviantart did it as a commission for me of my ponysona with his smallest OC on my nose.
He is called The FriendlyElephant.

The Beast Wars fic is called His New Queen. The Cover Art has the Predacon Inferno on it.

Whoever she smelled will have the best time of his life. He might need a new pelvis afterwards, though.

7567097 No problem, I am away right now working on some family matters but I am working on the next few chapters and hope to get them up in the next few days.

If Wicker was voiced, what would he sound like? Will Thorax appear in this story?

7655859 If he was too be voiced, i would say James Arnold Taylor's bobby drake/iceman voice from Marvel Heroes (video-game). James Arnold Taylor is really good at giving young but still mature sounding voices and i like the way his voice sounds. Also yes i do plan to have Thorax in later chapters but mainly for a cameo position.

Nice. And why are you arguing, Wicker, you're living the dream!

Spotted some typos here and there, but nothing major.

7656407 Hopefully all other changelings won't turn out to be ready to betray Chryssie at the drop of the hat this time.

7657073 if you wouldn't mind pointing those out to me I'd appreciate it.

Chryssie is hot, Chryssie is bothered and come hell and high water she's gonna scratch her itch.

'strained foreword despite' - forward

'Mandrake was commander of the Insidian' - a commander

Nice. Love me some ball play.

D'awwww, she does care.

'Not too say' - to

'his sweaty and hot bothered skin' - and hot cd bothered

'It lapped at her the pressure and' - He lapped at her, the pressure and

'Her front hooves came gently rest over his back' - came to gently

Broo this story is amazing keeping it tracked hope to see more!

Good story, Wicker and Chrysalis are a cute couple, would like to see it get finished.

Years after years ( 2 :P) i come back to this story. It prob is most watched story by me.

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