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Again...Unexpected...
But If I remember correctly about Hazama/Terumi, The Body belongs to Kazuma Kval and The Mind is Yuuki Terumi and both have become one into a being known as Hazama. Even after the Elements were used on him, they cannot be separated.
They Should be glad that Terumi didn't use his Astral Heat: Unholy Wrath of the Basilisk.
I Wonder What False Story that Celestia told her ponies about Hazama/Terumi. Since one of them called him: The Green Demon. Let's See Where their Journey will lead them.
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Yes, separation is impossible
It'll get better as time progresses, remember, there's two minds against one now. How long will Hazama last? How will he handle it?
I cant wait to write it! >.<
I've got a surprise for the next chapter, but apparently I've got a knack for those
Wait what will happen to nightmare moon, she will talk in hazama head?
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Ah, I forgot to put that in.. Yes. They both will be talking to Hazama quite a bit from now on
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I absolutely love that you alway comment
Thank you
7597099 Well at least yuuki have someone or in this case somepony talk to
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7597282 I approve!!!
I have been interested more, one more than I can decide if I like it or I'm gonna go crazy with the ship... Ok?
7597778 What's wrong with my ship? >.<
I thought I Was doing good..
Hazama and luna pairing all the way. Great story keep up a good work update more soon
For some reason this chapter feels awfully cliché.
Decent though.
Nitpicks:
repeating words one too many times.
see the error here?
7597876 This ship could sink and when it does, it's downhill from there because the story is based around it. Ok?
Most of the "they're" needed to be changed to "their"
"They're" is short for "they are" while "their" is the plural form of possession. As in belonging to a group of individuals.
Soooooooooooooo heartwarming!