Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ How Starlight became a magical unicorn Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ

by Starlight-Spirit

Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ Chapter 2: Becoming a magical unicorn Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ

Author's Note:

This is my first time writing something down and with alot of help from one of my friend Ben Woodall chapter 1 and 2 are almost done I thought I'd upload them to see what people think so far.

As I now knew I was stuck in this world and there was no way back I decided I must adventure onwards before leaving this room that I had landed in, I decided why not take a quick look around see if there's anything I could discover about this world unfortunately all I discovered was a couple of mirrors on the wall a couple of lamps and that the room was in fact made of crystal with some big wooden doors showing the way out.

"I guess it's time I adventured further in" I said.

As I opened the doors there was a loud creaking sound like they haven't been oiled in years! What I found beyond these doors I never thought I would see.

I found a very long crystal hallway with many doors along it. There is a few mirrors on the walls a few lights hanging from the ceiling but not much else. As I slowly started to walk down this long corridor to discover where I was I heard a Gerard or so I thought, one of the doors swung wide open and suddenly there was are unicorn stood right in front of me. It was wearing a red coat with a blue belt across his chest he had blue eyes and a blue Mane that was different shades of blue. I also noticed that on his rear leg he had a blue shield with a purple star in the middle of it and three little blue stars above it. His instant reaction was shocking I would say he was a very surprised to see me standing here before him having no idea where I was. There was a moment of silence as we stared at each other but, then

he asked me "how did I get here?"

I replied with, “where is this place? What world am I in?”

he then asked if I may follow him

I said "sure why not what's the worst that could happen?"

As he started to walk down the corridor I followed, a few moments later we reached another door this door however was much bigger than all the other doors I had recently seen. With a glow of his horn he opened the door. Waiting inside was two alicorns sat on what looked to be to Royal Thrones. From the door to the thrones there is a red carpet the alicorns looked shocked to see that I was here, instantly standing up they told me to stand in the middle of the room.

So I did, one of the alicorns was white she was wearing a golden crown with a purple diamond embedded into the centre of the crown she was also wearing a necklace with the same sort of gem embedded in the centre of that and some very fancy golden horseshoes. She had a sun on her leg and she had a sort of rainbow ich mein was Purple eyes the other alicorn was a dark blue with a black crown and necklace with a moon embedded into them and on her leg she had a moon which had a dark night sky background. Her mane was like the night sky dark blue with white dots.

The White alicorn walked up to me sniffed me a little, poked a little and then asked
"where have you come from?"

I replied with “I have come from the planet Earth, by a book that I found in a library” I showed her the book as I was still holding it she took the book in a magical grip. With a faint glow around the book I let it go and she took a closer look at the old thing

“you found this?” she said sounding surprised

“yes in one of my local libraries.” I replied

“This is a powerful book young one, this book contains grate magic that cannot be undone. Where did you say your from? And I don't believe we have gotten to know each other yet, my name is Celestia and this is my sister Lunra.” she said

“Oh my name is Starlight and I have come from a place called Earth.” I replied

“Well Starlight I'm sorry to say but you’re stuck here forever.” she replied

“That doesn’t seem too bad to me, the only problem is I don't know anything about this world.” I replied

“well we can help you learn our ways if you want to and we can fix your appearance.” she said.

Comments

[Sk1Tz]

Self insert story huh? Can't say I'm impressed with the originality of the piece, let alone the name itself. "Starlight Spirit"...sounds like something from a name generator.

Anyways, I'll give the story a chance. Be back shortly.

[Sk1Tz]

Ugh. Just as I expected. A generic stereotypical human-in-equestria story with a bland Mary sue and out of character characters, leaving an overall bore of a read with spelling issues.

[Starlight-Spirit]

7512872 Ok The name Starlight Spirit came about because I love to look at the night sky and see all the stars and Spirit came about because I wish to live forever (Will never happen). for my Spelling sorry but for someone with dyslexia among other things I don't know how to make my spelling and reading 100% (I know my spelling and reading skills are shit there's nothing I can do). As for the story it's just random shitty ideas that popped it my head I don't read much so if there is others like this then I have not read them as the only to fanfic's I have are Fallout Equestria and Anthropology.