Its good i like it

7506259 Depending how well this goes for next twenty or more hours, I might continue it if people like it.

This is interesting, I don't see many Dishonored stories on here.

Hopefully this will keep going and not flop. So keep going m8 caz it's pretty chill.

Please don't.

7506418 What?

This seems good.
more.

You have my attention.

You good sir, have my attention.

The Real question is: Can you keep it?

I look forward to more....

Your story has my full attention now keep up the good work update more soon

7506362 nice

7506420 *Read Title* So, they are displaced as Corvo. I'll read later.

Woah woah woah. Are you stating that he is currently living in the Void?!

Unless he is a Void Dweller, which are Either Displaced that gained enough power that they collapsed their universe around them and then essentially absorbed it, or a Sentient Concept, like Middy's Essence, which are born in the Void, he should not be able to exist in the Void for less than a nanosecond.

Please revise this, as he is essentially smacking the Lore in the face

7508531 I think your referring to the Displaced Void's lore (Which I do not follow anymore). I'm usint the Void from Dishonored.

7508610 If it's a Displaced, it has to follow the Lore. Anything that isn't a Void Dweller can't survive in the Void. The moment he entered the Void, he should have been wiped from existence.
Fic or not, a Displaced must follow the Rules. Rule numbero uno? Stick with the Lore.
Until this is fixed, it isn't accepted as actual Displaced canon, and will be put into the "Denied" folder

7508634 I don't care, I really don't. I'm free to write to my heart's contempt.

7508610
7508634 You're talking about different voids.
vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/dishonoredvideogame/images/b/b1/Void_islands.png/revision/latest?cb=20140803124600
You meant these, right? Those are part of the universe of your own story, and completely fine.

7508656 Exactly. Thank you.

7508642 I did not notice the edit where you stated that this was the Dishonored Void realm/thing. I am sorry for this misunderstanding. However, I will be keeping tabs to ensure that you do not break any rules or disregard the Lore. If you do, then you already know what will happen.
Though repeated violation will result in a ban. Know this now.
Also, it might be a good idea to specify which Void

7508664 Right~

7508668 Heh....

7508772 What's so funny?

7508785 that whole conversation idk why but it was funny to me

wow this is good so far, btw i was a bit confused, are they all pony's, anthro pony, or all human?

7589460 Human

7589565 thanks, keep it up :)
heck at this rate you might get the REAL outsiders attention.