In this one shot story, we get a glimpse of Celestia as the all powerful villainess, Nightmare Star, and her harsh and cruel reign over Equestria.
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kurusagi16
I love fairytales, anime and a bit of an mlp fim fan. fluttercord is a bit of a guilty pleasure for me. ^.^ Fluttershy is one my favorite ponies next to Discord.
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This is way too simple and underdone, and the song feels pasted in
It's a bit rushed. Also, Nightmare Star? In my opinion, I feel like it would be Daymare Sun.
Anyway, it's a fun idea, I just feel like you should tweek it a bit. If DISCORD couldn't break the elements. Or Nightmare, I feel like it would be impossible for evil Celestia.
But good idea and concept. Try again, I'll be rooting for you on the sidelines!!!
7503685
I know it's rushed, but it's just a one shot, I didn't really plan on expanding it or anything. Also, the name Nightmare Star is what Hasbro came up with on the trading cards. I saw it and thought it looked awesome. I just threw this out just because I could and wanted to get this concept I cooked out of my head.
7503381
I know, not one of my best works. T_T
7503792
It's quite a good concept. Just try adjusting some things and you got it!
Immediately I'm starting to regret having published this story. (Please, for those who've read this and don't like it, please forget this story's existence or something. I'll try to bring out better stories next time, but in this case, not every story can be perfect.) Maybe I'm just not cut out for one shots. -_-
She edits out bits of history she doesn't like, She monologues before fights, She has a giant palace and piles of treasure, She's feared by her subjects, She toys with those fears for her own amusement... And that's Celestia from the show already.
Why would an 'evil' her do anything differently?
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7703274
I know...it's bad.
7703495 No. It's not that. Your story is good.
I tried to be mysterious but it failed.
7706011
Oh, I see.
7706289 I'm a french shit in jokes.
(It's not racist, I'm french.)