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Klaatu barada nikto =^.^=

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"For safety reasons, it might be best to keep all the doors in the house unlocked, including your front door. As well, have friends close by, so that they can come and help you at a moment's notice, if you ever need them. Keeping a mobile close at hand would be a good idea too."
-One-Man Hide and Seek Creepypasta

Companion to The Truth behind My Little Pony.Artwork done by the amazingly talented Maii
And Special thanks to MisterNick for all his help.

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Comments ( 67 )

:trixieshiftright: oook? Feel a little underwhelmed here.

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If you haven't read his/her previous fics then you probably should, it means a lot more when you read them.

Love this fic and your series, their freaking cool, your way too underated and deserve more attention.

13. Bring the military and the marines.

This was a good ritual story, but I think one thing you could've added was like, the consequences on what would happen if you did the ritual wrong or didn't follow the rules. Like, for example, if you were to look at the TV directly, the ponies will drag you into their world and eat you alive or something like that.

8013317 Good idea. I should have.

8014586 You can do that i guess by making another fic that basically is a first-person account of someone trying to do the ritual, and something going wrong.

8039231 If the right idea comes I will.

8039400 could be taken in a found-footage kind of thing

8039617 Lol I already have something planned in that vein. "The Exorcism of Allen Watson." Is what it's called. Coming out alittle later.

8039617 And thankies for der follow it is mucho appreciated.:pinkiehappy:

ok i have to read this on my youtube channel

8171082 Awesome and welcome to Fimfic. If you have and questions don't hesitate to ask.:pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Warlock_BOO deleted May 23rd, 2017

Meh... Image is terrifying but story is a mundane ritual that ends in a way real black magic spells don't.

3/5

So its a spin on one man tag/ one man hide and seek/ the midnight man? If it is, you did well.

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Thank you I appreciate it and yes. I read one man hide and seek and the Tree Kings story and I wanted to try my hand on a ritual pasta.

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That was fun. :D

I like the ending, just add the steps:
13: Nuke house from orbit.
14: Change name and Identity.
15: Move to a far away country.
and then it will be perfect.

Umm, I want a refund on this. all I got was some drunk hobo telling me he was the tooth fairy.

WORST.DEMON SUMMONING SPELL. EVER!

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At least you didnt get the hobo who told me he had some candy in his van.

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psh! That's an average Tuesday for me! We're working on getting a restraining order though.

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I wish you the best with that. Though from personal experience when they start wearing the bunny suit RUN!

I did it and all I got was Jane the Killer. :pinkiehappy:

Not true, but I wish... :raritycry:

I want some pizza right now. :yay:<YAY)

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Thank you .^^


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Not Jane in a bunny suit?

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That's insanity man...

Oof, majorly creepy. :rainbowderp: The last line cements the whole creepy vibe from the rest of it. Well done, that.

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Thank you that means a lot.

What if I wanted to snuggle them, though?

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These aren't the kind of ponies you really want to snuggle with.^^

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Nor are we to play with them, but here's a guide on that.

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Is this from Spongebob "The Camping Episode"? or the The Poltergeist?

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If those instructions are good, I wonder what happens if challenge them to a fight?

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Their actually pretty easy to kill. The problem is their already dead so they would be back shortly. And not all too happy

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You mean they're like zombies?

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Kinda. Except more intelligent.

jmj

This was amazingly creepy. Listened to Tom Waits while I read it. Weird combination. I really enjoyed the creepypasta feel. I get that from the things you write. i, myself, have never been good at writing them but I do enjoy them thoroughly.

i wonder what would the ponies do if you took a picture of them

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Huh good question. Ill have to think about that.

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A mixture of the two. Discord did create those things because he thought it would be funny. After all its hard to take a pink pony that continuously spouting “friendship” as a threat until it rips your throat out. And secondly the show is a doorway for the “ponies” to go in and out of.

I gave it a short original ending dialogue to drive home the creepy feeling. Sorry. But it was a good read

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