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Huzzah! It's finally here! Love it, and I can't wait to see what is in store for us next!
Hopefully Chapter 1 will follow soon enough, and then all the others not long thereafter.
THIS one looks to be an even wilder ride than the original version, and I am happy to be a part of this lovely story.
I'm liking this new version already! I can't wait to read more!
i hope twi is still going to be the all powerfull archdemon she was in the original and still saves celestia from getting rebanished
I hope this time that Dash either isn't Twi's pet, or that the others are all subservient to Twi rather then just Dash, as it felt weird in the first version.
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Respectfully disagree. I actually liked that in the original.
7666802 Everyone has different likes and dislikes so no worries
So is the original cancelled?
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I liked the two of them being closer. It made sense the group had different relationships built in Tartarus.
I think I will just favorite it in advance, seeing as I don't have time to read it right now
Best of luck
Although, it's a little disheartening, 'cause it means we will not see anything really new anytime soon :c
Damn, that cover-art. Definitely an upgrade in that department.
"Rip and tear, until it is done"
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Since I'm the only active author currently and this is the version I'm working on, yeah.
I'll prod Cody to update the tag on it when he can.
7666759
Yes and yes, but this time they are going to work harder to achieve their plans as their opponents will pose a much more significant threat.
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Dash and Rarity are Twilight's. And subservience has been shown in both their scenes. This will be retained but better described.
Pinkie and Fluttershy belong to Cadance, and have basically been absent from the story. This will be getting fixed and they will have the screen time they deserve.
Aj reports to a different powerful demon entirely, and so does not belong to either Twilight or Cadance.
No new content my flank
This version certainly does take a much... edgier approach to the whole story. I'm not yet sure from this two chapters if I will like it as I did original, but I guess i'll try
Oh, btw, artworks are disturbing. Separate kudos to you for those, Ashinda.
7667475 cool
im guessing fancy is in charge of some resistance of sorts.
something tells me, that no innocents are going to get too hurt, also is the random amre ok?
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Thank you ^_^
Also, who communicated that the revision was not going to have new content? Cuz, like... that's sorta the entire point of doing this. :)
7666759 Oh, you don't have to worry about that. Twi will be the same way in this version as she was in the original one.
Hang on, though. From what I know, THIS one's gonna be an even BUMPIER ride than the original.
No pun intended, of course.
7669323 its all good the only reason i ask was i swear cadence was a different kind of demon in the original with twi being the arch demon of power or something
7669245 ...me... Buuuuuut I saw the wrong of my ways after deciding that I can't wait and need to read this asap
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Cadance is the Archdemon of Lust
Twilight is the Archdevil of Power
I can ask Twilight to borrow her copy of A Fel Compendium of Tartarus and Its Denizens for a more in depth explanation. But it's likely to be covered in story this time around.
7669330 Okay.
Bur for a better worded reply than I could EVER come up with, see Ashinda's reply here: 7669557
Should I read the original first?
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Only if you want a shorter, briefer storytelling style for chapters 1-6. If you prefer to be surprised, then stick with us here :)
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OK I will. I'm just ready for more already
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Chapter 2 is at 2100 words, and is not complete yet. I am trying to figure out an integral clop scene, one that has to be there to make the story make sense. So I am working on it as I may. As soon as it's worked out, I shall post the next chapter. I currently have one solid support who is helping me work through the clop. We'll show our work as soon as we can.
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We'll be here waiting
Oh i love how there will be some huge pain for the nobles and bluebood (since it seems to be around 12 years later) oh he is going to have it the worst
i wait the pain
Huh...well this rewrite looks to be a much deeper and crazy one. The fact that Blueblood isn't a complete asshat and is helping Fancy and possibly the resistance is something that warms my heart. Can't wait to see the unicorn council go down in flames.
Wait, so, I'm confused. Is the original now cancelled?
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Yes, the original is now cancelled, and the revision will be upgrading it.
here is a few thing i hope for this story (never read the original and not going to)
1 while cadence and the main six can be vengeful i some what hope they have not gone full on evil i can get giving that look but the noble are the what i see at least the main bad they betrayed celestia and Luna and accidentally banished the group
2 at some point celestia and luna come back i fine if there a bit like nightmare moon i would be ticked to
3 this is not just a know at least some one demonic mane six and cadence getting some payback on the nobles some world bild like how if/when the noble are killed/ dethroned how the rule changes
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*smiles*
*grins*
*laughs!*
*cackles Maniacally!*
Oh my friend. Sit down and get comfy. Boy, do we have a tale to tell you.
7685334 hehe even if they go full evil still going to read i just find the idea of them being more vengeful to full on evil more hmmmmm open yeah that would work
gives more paths i feel
Well its a good beginning for the remake of this good story
. Personally I do hope, that you will continue the pairings of the older story, or you will likely lose readers. Because those pairings were what I like and loved about the story 
. Lose it, and goodbye readers 
. This is your attempt to recreate the original story that been stopped, and your new readers, the ones following it will expect was in the old story to made into this new one 
. So for me, I expect a similar harem for Twilight to reappear. 
I am happy this is be rewritten, and will go on,
was think about this story this morning and choose to look it up and how happy I was to see it being rewritten and redone.....
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Very little of the original plot will be lost. But there will be a lot of fleshing out and better characterizations to make the pacing less jarring and properly introduce the key characters.
Is it coming all at once or one chapter at a time.
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Chapter at a time. Chapter 2 is sitting at 3100 words and I am badly blocked currently. Working through it as I can, and I will get it up as soon as I can push through this problem.
We thought the old version couldn't get any better.
We were wrong
great to see this story back.
An excellent chapter as always, and I can't wait to see what happens to "Nebby" (Celestia's Mane, I love that nickname!) in the next chapter!
He'll get just EXACTLY what he deserves, like the worthless, lecherous, murdering piece of scum that he is, I hope! roundstable.com/forums/images/smilies/applejargh.gif
mmmmmm good story
hmmm while the ending leaves me a Little suspicious there is a good amount of evidence that this is going the way i hoped vengeful pay back not heroes turned to full on arch villain due to a betrayal. while i would be fine with that more hopeing for a vengeful cast to heroes turned evil demon. the ending can be explained in a few ways that don't involve draining free will or soul from green leaves
I still hope you can ge a clop writer it kind of feels like it belongs in here, probably becouse of the cuts that will need to be made.
it is still a great story but it just feels like it is missing something without the clop, probably because it is writen like it is seposed to be there instead of the cut.
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I agree, the clop would be really nice to have. That is why I am ending the chapter like this. So that at some future point the clop may be added in as a separate chapter filling the negative space I am leaving.
Hmm I'm disappointed that the more sensual scenes are being skipped over. Cramming them in later is almost never ideal either. I'm still watching, but the next few updates will likely determine if that continues. Otherwise this was a very nice little scene and I look forward to seeing what is next.
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Watch or don't, that's always up to you.
Ashinda is currently the one and only active writer on this story, and he's not super comfortable writing highly descriptive sex. So if you're coming for the clop, then you'll get the scenes that were written in the original story when they are repolished for the new. He's comfortable enough doing that. But if you want new clop scenes built from whole cloth published in union with chapters in the main plot then you need to either help find the writer/writers to make that happen, or be an active participant in helping Ashinda figure that part out.
You can do that by volunteering to be a proofreader, being available as a sounding board, offering suggestions and input during the writing process over Slack or using Google Docs comments.
Since this is a story written for fun and not for profit, either it stays fun for the only active writer/artist we've got or we won't see progress.
Cheers!