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...Dear God...

This could have happened in the episode. Not the dying part, obviously, but Ponyville was lucky RD didn't start attacking when backed into a corner

I...

Um...

Hmmmm...

Welp, that was a thing, yes it was. I'm mildly horrified, but simultaneously amused. Can't blame the author though, I had a pretty good idea of just where this was going from the description.

You're a horrible, horrible person. Well done.

the first accusation fic.

Just 'bout how I imagined anyone would react to real zombies, kill them with fire.

“Here at the end of all cookies.”

Laughed harder at this line than I should have,

Rainbow Dash is really protective of cookies.

...

Yeeaaaaahhh... if this wasn't a children's show, that probably would have happened during the episode.

...umm...

...whatever you're smoking, it's a bit too strong for me. :rainbowderp:


Just 'bout how I imagined anyone would react to real zombies, kill them with fire.

Yeeaaaaahhh... if this wasn't a children's show, that probably would have happened during the episode.

And what the heck are you people on? You don't murder people because they have a cookie obsession. :fluttercry:

7479066 If they're zombies from a deadly cookie concoction, than yes, you have to defend yourself.

All the zombies movies/games tell me that there is no room for mercy or hesitation.

SS&E, people.

The F1 racer of going 0 to 60 in the writing world.

~Skeeter The Lurker

And suddenly, there was a princess vacancy!:trollestia:

. . .

Well, that was certainly... a thing.

I should have known better to expect a happy ending with this author. :rainbowlaugh:

Wydril #18 · Aug 14th, 2016 · · 2 ·

With how badly OOC she was in the episode, this ending would have fit in better than the actual show.

I was thinking about this all the episode. i imagined someone would write something like this. I should have figured it would be you...:rainbowwild:

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Eh, 5/7. Not enough suplexing.

:rainbowderp:
...
Thanks, Skirts.

Well, that took a turn for the insane. :pinkiecrazy:

Um, yeah, I'm just gonna... go over there. And hide. Forever.

Freakin' psychopaths...

Well...there it is.

Come on Rainbow isn't that stupid.

it seems as though I'll have to re-read this after I watch the latested episode... so here's to reliving this:twilightoops:

Is this the alternate timeline where Cookie Monster becomes an Alicorn Princess?

"Here, at the end of all cookies." Perhaps not the greatest literary line ever written but it does possess a bizarre kind of charm.

bruh i want cookies


story was pretty legit

Twilight and the others ~really~ should`ve thought this one through.

Seems about right, still a better ending then the episode one.
10/10
Would cookie again

I haven't even watched the episode and goddammit Skirts.

You wrote this just to work that last line into a fic didn't you? :rainbowlaugh:

Totally worth it!

7481771 It's a Lord of the Rings reference. While stranded on Mount Doom Frodo hugs Sam and says: "I'm glad to be with you, Samwise Gamgee, here at the end of all things".

7482809 Ah, then I take it back; that last line was epic.

>>Skeeter The Lurker
Stop following me! Guess we like similar stuff... your name reminds me of the Harry Potter character Rita Skeeter.

D48
D48 #41 · Aug 15th, 2016 · · 2 ·

...You know something is very wrong with the show when you can kill off the entire cast and still have the result make more sense than what happened in canon. :facehoof:

Followed a fic link
below a similar fic,
slightly underwhelmed.

Plot twist: rainbow dash was eaten alive and the episode ending was the ending she wished for in the afterlife

Fuckin' hell yeah. Apparently we had the same alternate ending in mind. Well, not quite, yours is a hell of a lot better than mine would of been!

Well... Dash is a fighter. It was not a smart idea to prank her in a barn full of dangerous equipment in the first place.

7484357 That's my headcanon from now on

Any appearances by Rainbow Dash in the future are a Changeling

I want to give you a cookie for this story....but they got burned in the barn T-T
So, I just let a thumbs up here.

lol someone should write a fic where :trollestia: finds the burned down barn and with all the burnt bodies and tries to make sense of what happened

Yeah, this is pretty much the second thing that I thought of after watching the episode. Dash does strike me as the kind of pony who would have watched way too many zombie movies.

I'm reminded of an alternate ending comic, where Rainbow performs a kamikaze rainboom to destroy the "horde".

Sometimes, true loyalty is providing mercy where none was needed. :pinkiecrazy:

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