When Twilight Sparkle (Sci-Twi) attends her first sleepover with her new friends, she discovers that Equestria magic effected them in a very unique way. When the girls all learn Twilight hasn't undergone the same change, it's open season on her!
Another great chapter. And yeah you should probably add Kink tags to the description, maybe even at the start of each chapter so people can't complain.
7489736 It's pretty new, he literally just finished it yesterday. :) I think that right now it's only available on his Patreon. But it'll be on his main page soon!
TL'DR: She doesn't even feel like a character more like a doll for the characters to fuck then throw into a corner when they are done Don't you think Twilight would be at least a little bit angry or at least perturbed, you know something less passive, since she was just left alone like a third wheel or a toy and treated with no affection and then she finds out that all of her "friends" are trying to impregnate her without even asking about it. Which would ruin her life and just from the them of this story she would be left with a bastard child unless this is actually a story about polyamoury. Nymphomania only goes so far and a genius like Twilight would at least realize the consequences and you knoe feel something othrr then nervous. P.S. Yes I know it is just smut but I am allowed to hold it to the standards of other storirs that have similar themes
7490255 If it makes you feel better, she does have supportive baby daddies. And either way, it occurs in a magical fetish world where boner related consequences aren't a big deal.
Shame to know this is a commission, probably no chance to see the AppleDashery ensue. That shower scene would be specially hot. We all know they'd be trying as hard to get each other pregnant as they'd twilight, impossibilities be dammed. They have magic, princess dammit!
Well, I'd put shimmie to be the mother. She seems to want to be with twilight in a romantic manner, after all. It would be equally if not more funny to see her trying so hard she ended up by trading assets with twi. Then everyone would become shimmie's best friend
7492341 Not necessarily, but when I started dirty writing a few years ago I was commissioned to do a lot of Korra stories that included the kink. Over time you kind of get defined by kinks you've done a lot of work for; so more commissions come your way for it.
I think pregnancy/risk of pregnancy can be a fun kink, but it's not my main one. I mean, if we're looking at common threads all four stories I have posted here have futas in them. (And more subtly, three out of four have women wearing glasses, which is a larger kink for me.)
I'm a little disturbed that they lied to Twilight about the pregnancy I would be PISSED if I were her. I really dont like that they just treat her like a blowup doll
7496586 Thanks! I'm actually about to head to bed, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stuff! That Twilight x Twilight story in particular.
Oof, this story hits all of my buttons. I really liked the double vag stuff, you don't see that sort of thing too often. I didn't like how Dash lied about not being able to get her pregnant though, that was a seriously douche bag move. I hope AJ smacks her upside the head for it.
7532875 The "contest" angle definitely seems like it's bee received differently. Some people seem to like it, some not. Though I'm glad you enjoyed it despite that angle. :) Hope you'll tune it for the next chapter soon!
7542916 Oh I don't mind the contest, that's super hot. What I don't like is that RD lied about it. For someone that's supposed to be Twilight's friend, and a loyal friend at that, she really doesn't seem to care much about her.
I've got no idea why her friendship shouldn't be immediately broken with Rainbow, and possibly Sunset. Rainbow deliberately said Sunset told her they couldn't get Twilight pregnant. I'm not sure if the text was Sunset's first reply or not, but what kind of jackass abuses the trust and love of a friend for a quick lay? I could buy the threadbare plot but these two just ascended into a whole new realm of horrible.
In the span of twelve hours Twilight Sparkle had gone from a shy young woman that had never even thought much about sex to a wildly intimate being; one that knew well the pleasure her friends could give her and the pleasure she could give back.
Twilight didn't get any restorative magic, so she is now a succubus. Only explanation.
The teenagerl dropped herself down to her knees
"teen-a-girl"
The scent of cock, the taste of precum...it was almost frightening for the young woman just how much she had come to relish it.
Totally my head canon for the story, all the sex is making Twilight into a demon without any of them knowing. First time she has sex with a male he is going to die.
“Sunset Shimmer said that since our cocks are magical, there’s no good reason to think we can get her pregnant. So she said to go for it!”
I could see this being a problem if the story was going to add some drama and not be a fuckfest.
She knew that Sunset Shimmer had said getting pregnant was impossible with their magical cocks
Unless Sunset said it sarcastically and Rainbow hung up before she could finish.
It would seem...the contest that Rainbow Dash and Applejack had spoken of wasn’t quite such a silly thing after all.
So Twilight was lied to! I think that requires some payback and a spermicide.
She had lost her virginity that early morning as each of her friends had taken a turn with her, grinding and thrusting filling up condom after condom with their cream.
Ah man, you skipped the best part. So sad. Hope the rest makes up for it, but it probably won't.
The teenagerl dropped herself down to her knees almost instantly after, her hands moving to the edge of Applejack’s shorts as she hooked her fingers against the waistband.
teenager _______________
Now that challenge of theirs is one I can get behind.
8201306 Getting filled with two cocks and filled with a massive amounts of cum didn't?
Well... This story is very well written, and hits a few of my kinks head on. Unfortunately that ending very much crosses several lines for me and with a peek at the first two paragraphs of the next chapter, its just blazing ahead on that path. Very unfortunate, but this is where I must take my leave. I'm quite the degenerate, but lying to lovers, pregnancy, and especially lying about the chance of pregnancy, make me extraordinary uncomfortable. Good day and well wishes to you all.
Another great chapter. And yeah you should probably add Kink tags to the description, maybe even at the start of each chapter so people can't complain.
take all bet on who knock twilight up first,
my vote for sunset or fluttershy
Where exactly can I find the cover image? I looked around on Avernalism's tumblr a bit but unless it's REALLY far back I didn't see it.
7489736 It's pretty new, he literally just finished it yesterday. :) I think that right now it's only available on his Patreon. But it'll be on his main page soon!
I vote for unigue Sunset/Pinkie/Fluttershy together get her pregeant with triplets.
I kinda want Sunset to win purely because she seems like the only one actually in romantic love with Twilight
TL'DR: She doesn't even feel like a character more like a doll for the characters to fuck then throw into a corner when they are done
Don't you think Twilight would be at least a little bit angry or at least perturbed, you know something less passive, since she was just left alone like a third wheel or a toy and treated with no affection and then she finds out that all of her "friends" are trying to impregnate her without even asking about it. Which would ruin her life and just from the them of this story she would be left with a bastard child unless this is actually a story about polyamoury. Nymphomania only goes so far and a genius like Twilight would at least realize the consequences and you knoe feel something othrr then nervous.
P.S. Yes I know it is just smut but I am allowed to hold it to the standards of other storirs that have similar themes
7490255 If it makes you feel better, she does have supportive baby daddies. And either way, it occurs in a magical fetish world where boner related consequences aren't a big deal.
Whoa, holy shit, this story just crossed the fucking line. I'm out.
7491009 No worries, if it's not your thing it's not your thing, man. Not every piece of dirty writing is for everyone.
Shame to know this is a commission, probably no chance to see the AppleDashery ensue. That shower scene would be specially hot. We all know they'd be trying as hard to get each other pregnant as they'd twilight, impossibilities be dammed. They have magic, princess dammit!
Well, I'd put shimmie to be the mother. She seems to want to be with twilight in a romantic manner, after all. It would be equally if not more funny to see her trying so hard she ended up by trading assets with twi. Then everyone would become shimmie's best friend
7491060 This is true, and failing to get consent before impregnating someone is way past my limit. I mean seriously, that is messed up.
7491642 Mature feedback, thanks.
Well, I'll be sticking around.
Do you have some sort of pregnancy fetish? Not judging, but definitely an odd focal point for two stories to share.
7492341 Not necessarily, but when I started dirty writing a few years ago I was commissioned to do a lot of Korra stories that included the kink. Over time you kind of get defined by kinks you've done a lot of work for; so more commissions come your way for it.
I think pregnancy/risk of pregnancy can be a fun kink, but it's not my main one. I mean, if we're looking at common threads all four stories I have posted here have futas in them. (And more subtly, three out of four have women wearing glasses, which is a larger kink for me.)
only RD and AJ would come up with a competition where they try to find out which one of knocks up Twilight first.
I'm a little disturbed that they lied to Twilight about the pregnancy I would be PISSED if I were her. I really dont like that they just treat her like a blowup doll
7492025 Hehe, thanks for that.
Now that i think of it. You would think that twilight would be a little worried that her friends are trying to knock her up
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Well I DO have a big pregnancy fetish, and most of your stories is hitting all the right notes with me.
Can't wait for more!
7496586 Thanks! I'm actually about to head to bed, but I'm looking forward to reading some of your stuff! That Twilight x Twilight story in particular.
Can't wait for the next chapter! ;D
Don't stop now! We're just getting started with this contest!
Oof, this story hits all of my buttons. I really liked the double vag stuff, you don't see that sort of thing too often.
I didn't like how Dash lied about not being able to get her pregnant though, that was a seriously douche bag move. I hope AJ smacks her upside the head for it.
Futanari on female, cumplay, group sex, two cocks in one hole, bukakke, risk of pregnancy/unprotected sex
The italized fetishes.
They are MY kind of fetishes. HOt as frick.
Keep it upppppp! :D
My vote is possibly anyone who can do it.
I am enjoying every moment of these stories. they are sooooo gooooodddd
7538900 Definitely keeping it up! There's a new chapter coming...this week!
7532875 The "contest" angle definitely seems like it's bee received differently. Some people seem to like it, some not. Though I'm glad you enjoyed it despite that angle. :) Hope you'll tune it for the next chapter soon!
7523373 I won't stop!
(Psst: Secret! Chapters 3 and 4 are already written, and 5 is scheduled to be penned this month!)
7542909 Yay! The excitement and hype i feel are real!
7542916
Oh I don't mind the contest, that's super hot. What I don't like is that RD lied about it. For someone that's supposed to be Twilight's friend, and a loyal friend at that, she really doesn't seem to care much about her.
I've got no idea why her friendship shouldn't be immediately broken with Rainbow, and possibly Sunset. Rainbow deliberately said Sunset told her they couldn't get Twilight pregnant. I'm not sure if the text was Sunset's first reply or not, but what kind of jackass abuses the trust and love of a friend for a quick lay? I could buy the threadbare plot but these two just ascended into a whole new realm of horrible.
Twilight didn't get any restorative magic, so she is now a succubus. Only explanation.
"teen-a-girl"
Totally my head canon for the story, all the sex is making Twilight into a demon without any of them knowing. First time she has sex with a male he is going to die.
I could see this being a problem if the story was going to add some drama and not be a fuckfest.
Unless Sunset said it sarcastically and Rainbow hung up before she could finish.
So Twilight was lied to! I think that requires some payback and a spermicide.
Ah man, you skipped the best part. So sad. Hope the rest makes up for it, but it probably won't.
Ya / ya
(Ya = you
Y'all = You all (plural you)).
Ya'll = You will (you'll)).
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teenager
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Now that challenge of theirs is one I can get behind.
8201306
Getting filled with two cocks and filled with a massive amounts of cum didn't?
Wish you'd labeled the story Non-con, that's really not something I'm into at all.
8551147
Yeah kinda same tbh. Or at the least dub-con for the first chapter, this chapter is more likely non-con since she had been lied to.
It’s not necessarily something I’m into, but I’m curious about the remainder of the story.
and fast and stronger?
Damn dude, shit just got real haha.
There was one typo that I noticed in the first third of the chapter, though, something like teenagerl.
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In the South y'all is both singular and plural, it all depends on the context and whom you're addressing Take it from someone who lives there.
Well... This story is very well written, and hits a few of my kinks head on. Unfortunately that ending very much crosses several lines for me and with a peek at the first two paragraphs of the next chapter, its just blazing ahead on that path. Very unfortunate, but this is where I must take my leave. I'm quite the degenerate, but lying to lovers, pregnancy, and especially lying about the chance of pregnancy, make me extraordinary uncomfortable. Good day and well wishes to you all.