A group of 12 friends dress up as characters from Lord of the Rings and end up in an Equestria controlled by caribou and now must help take Equestria back and defeat Diann.
Firstly, this has some great potential. Secondly, the potential is hampered a bit due to the grammar issues i saw in it. Thirdly, i will follow this and like it as it seems like a good story with potential to be great.
Wolfenstein and Lord of the ring mix up i love it .
7484936 Thanks :D
Firstly, this has some great potential.
Secondly, the potential is hampered a bit due to the grammar issues i saw in it.
Thirdly, i will follow this and like it as it seems like a good story with potential to be great.
7485461 Thanks on the first and third. But I always like feedback on my stories. :)