Alex was minding his own business, after being coaxed into wearing a Tohsaka Archer cosplay a chance encounter with the Merchant sent him to Equestria, now he must find a way to survive.
LMAO Neokiva that was great second chapter Looks good keep it up at least we now know that Archer is a heroic spirit kinda suprised that they had to kill starsworld
If you have plans for the cover art, then no worries, mate. I was more just making sure this would have something.
Honestly, what I was saying was your main characters more so than the plot (maybe me saying conflict was bad phrasing). Let me put it this way; if this is a crossover anyways, and you want Archer in the story, then why not cut out the middle man and just put Archer from Fate/Stay Night as the protagonist? All I'm saying is a story featuring main characters who are average cosplayers from our world is a cliche that people generally dislike.
That said, if you do want to write it with the protagonists you have, go ahead. There's nothing stopping you, I'm just telling you that you're going to catch a lot of flak.
7471349 Aye then, Lad! Do ye wish to sail the brine in search of booty?
OK word of advice the first half of this you had people speaking Japanese with no translation don't do that it is absolutely unacceptable unless you're writing something entirely in Japanese I like this story I like it a lot so it hurts to see such a huge mistake lowering the quality
8857736 lol it kind of got silly. ps titty all day everyday and praise micheal are reference to a youtube show called fine game bitches, that reviews the attractiveness of video game girls.
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It was nice to work on this!
7472807 indeed it was fun.
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probably should post a link to my page/story so the people know who you're crossing with tho...
7472812 it's in the authors notes
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Right, I also redirected some of my readers here as well!
7472824 kk
funny i liked it
LMAO Neokiva that was great second chapter Looks good keep it up at least we now know that Archer is a heroic spirit kinda suprised that they had to kill starsworld
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WE FORGOT TO ADD THIS!!!!
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Ah, my theme song. Glorious.
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If you have plans for the cover art, then no worries, mate. I was more just making sure this would have something.
Honestly, what I was saying was your main characters more so than the plot (maybe me saying conflict was bad phrasing). Let me put it this way; if this is a crossover anyways, and you want Archer in the story, then why not cut out the middle man and just put Archer from Fate/Stay Night as the protagonist? All I'm saying is a story featuring main characters who are average cosplayers from our world is a cliche that people generally dislike.
That said, if you do want to write it with the protagonists you have, go ahead. There's nothing stopping you, I'm just telling you that you're going to catch a lot of flak.
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Aye then, Lad! Do ye wish to sail the brine in search of booty?
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Gai's a space pirate, so NOBODY IS SAFE.
OK word of advice the first half of this you had people speaking Japanese with no translation don't do that it is absolutely unacceptable unless you're writing something entirely in Japanese I like this story I like it a lot so it hurts to see such a huge mistake lowering the quality
Wtf just happened? What was that? What was any of that? (Markiplier quote for the win lol)
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lol it kind of got silly.
ps titty all day everyday and praise micheal are reference to a youtube show called fine game bitches, that reviews the attractiveness of video game girls.