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I write pony words that people seem to like. I also review fics and draw purty pictures, apperently. I'm an older fan of MLP, so expect a lot of 80's references.

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Damn this story got me loving the Dazzlings even more, but one question. What was that about you being grumpy about the clop community?

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Eh, a bunch of small things that, honestly, plague a lot of writing, not just the clop community. Quality lagging, rehashing old ideas, the overuse of tropes in lazy ways(all of which I'm am/was guilty of myself). It just pushed me to try and write some quality, happy, non-fetish sex.

7462885 Oh OK yeah, I see what you mean.

sirens banging is always a fun little thing lol

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I came here for the cover art, and I find this. I can't agree more, I'm starting to lose my patience with how many summaries are the subject of horrible grammar, looking like the author is running their stuff through a poor quality online translator. And that's to say nothing of the stories themselves. The overall lack of quality is so bad, when I find a story with a premise I like, I'm half tempted to submit a corrected rewrite to the author.

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You have no clue just how happy I am to see someone share that sentiment.

Because we totally don't need more SUPER HYPER GIGANTO COCK WITH CUM-BLIMP INFLATING VORE ACTION.

It's annoying.

~Skeeter The Lurker

And hey, whaddya know.

This is sum gud shit right here.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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Well...I derped.

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The overall lack of quality is so bad, when I find a story with a premise I like, I'm half tempted to submit a corrected rewrite to the author.

^^THIS^^ You and me both. It's not like it's a new problem or anything either. Honestly, I think it comes in waves. We get a couple of quality mature rated stories that hit the site, then nothing but schlock for months, then a couple more good ones, then more schlock. But the good ones are so out numbered by the bad if you blink, you'll miss them.

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Or rape fics. Or mind control/slutification/character assassination for the sake of tits. These stories could be good, but no, they are almost all trite, overplayed, and so stuffed to the gills with hentai tropes, it's not just fluids they are about to explode with. Also, glad you liked it.

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If I can be frank, I'm alright with rape, but only in a pure "roleplay" sense. Outside that NOPE.

...And foodplay, too, actually.

But anything else? Plsno.

Also I went and added this to the right folders in HQMF. It's worthy.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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I can agree with that. I hold roleplaying up as one of the frequently good examples of mature writing, because it has to be more than just the smut and the smut can be actually interesting.

But we don't see those sorts of fics very often and I can only assume that's because too many authors find them to be too hard to do, or so many authors have accepted the shit quality of clop as normal.

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It isn't just clop that's having a lack of quality put into it. Rather it's a great many stories across a great many categories, which makes the problem even worse since you can't blame it on the authors being too horny to think.

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In part, I think it's a bunch of authors that care more about views than effort or skill. Which we've always had an overabundance of spanning every category we could name. The thing that gets me is there is no growth from this crowd. They don't get better. They don't take a look at their work and think, 'Hey, I can do better next time. I'll try to fix up mistakes and improve.' They get views and mindless comments that feed the idea that they don't need to grow, they don't need to improve, and that angers me just a little bit.

Adagio narrowed his eyes,

her*

running a hard down her front into the valley between her legs

hand

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ah, both of those right near the start too! How embarassink!

Fixed.

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Well HOT DAMN!

I was not expecting that! You, sir, get two thumbs, WAY up!
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Woo, that was one steamy shower. Well done! :raritywink:

And I 1000% agree with your mindset of putting some real quality into your mature work. I try to do the same as well, so it's great to find others who are likeminded. :)

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The few, the proud...

Keep doing god's work, Grand Moff.

I know someone already did a reading of this but here have one with female voice acting and narration. xD Enjoy! Hope you like my Dazzling impressions :)

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Whoa...I was NOT expecting this. Thank you!

Who's awesome?
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YOU'RE awesome!

7863289 Haha thanks glad you like it!

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Oh shit, and Wubcake did a reading of it, too? :D Might be worth relistening to.

Whatever you were trying to accomplish with this, you succeeded.

Holy shit, this was you?? I've loved this fic since I first stumbled upon it two months ago (when my obsession with Rainbow Rocks and the Sirens was on full blast). Dude, this is GREAT!

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I can definitely get behind non fetish sex.

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Hentai is 90% rape and male domination. The other 10 is fetish and actually good content.

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