Damn rainbow you should have told spike instead of making a promise to get him a datearly with rarity i...I'm sorry rainbow but mabye is not to late I hope
"*Just like I've been too stupid to tell him how I really feel...*" Oh come on! She even admits it herself! I feel like this could be considered a 4th wall break.
This is actually a really nice story, clop aside, I really enjoy the story. If I could make a suggestion maybe you could make the chapters a little longer. If you don't mind. It's just when I read I would like to be more immersed in this story and it's kinda hard to do with the chapters this size. Not by much. Maybe 500 or 600 more words.
Comment posted by Trollmario deleted Aug 12th, 2016
"Spike, I have to keep up on my studies.” Twilight tapped a backpack that was beside her on the bed. “If I fall behind, I might actually be on par with the everyone else instead of ahead.”
Oh god, oh my god, holy shit, that roast was so real I could SMELL it from here.
Poor Rainbow, she really wants it with Spike more.
GOD DAMMIT SPIKE CAN'T YOU TELL SHE WANT'S YOU SHE LITERALLY SAID IT IN THE FIRST CHAPTER
Damn rainbow you should have told spike instead of making a promise to get him a datearly with rarity i...I'm sorry rainbow but mabye is not to late I hope
"*Just like I've been too stupid to tell him how I really feel...*"
Oh come on! She even admits it herself! I feel like this could be considered a 4th wall break.
This is actually a really nice story, clop aside, I really enjoy the story. If I could make a suggestion maybe you could make the chapters a little longer. If you don't mind. It's just when I read I would like to be more immersed in this story and it's kinda hard to do with the chapters this size. Not by much. Maybe 500 or 600 more words.
Oh god, oh my god, holy shit, that roast was so real I could SMELL it from here.
Isn’t he married?
But she is an abnormal human.
disturbing the neighbors
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Thank you, unpaid editor.