Twilight Sparkle has faced countless challenges since taking on the mantle of a Princess over five hundred years ago, but none have been so hard as remaining healthy and vibrant while each of her friends has grown old and died. Now, beside the fresh grave of the last of them, she wonders if it was worth it. Teen rating for dealing with death and mortality.
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7777554 I don't care what everybody says, this was cool J/k
I would like to make a couple of points, though...
There are some headcanons that claim Cadence was born a pegasus. Personally, I haven't developed my own fan-verse far enough to cover that... yet...
I have a couple of commissions for Umbra out, actually; I literally had given no thought to Dawnbreaker beyond the name
What, you've never heard of Washington apples? Okay, yeah, I was reaching lol
That was actually in the story; see below...
All in all, I guess 20 isn't too bad; thanks for taking the time to do this and for not spoiling the twist ending, though I'm curious as to whether you saw that coming or not
Wow O.O
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That was sweet. Short, but sweet (Yes, I think tragedies are sweet…fight me).
All in all, it could've used a bit more history and context and a few of the paragraphs were a bit cluttered but, other than that I enjoyed it!
Good job!