Never Say Goodbye [Edited]

Co-Written by Tyion

Rarity and Fluttershy get kidnapped by a group of stallions that plan to defile and kill them. As they struggle to get out and fight for their lives their love begins to grow and flower. There is nothing the two ponies can't do when they are fueled by love.

Clean version of Never Say Goodbye, but still with adult themes.

Picture Source: http://flutterdashpie.tumblr.com/post/12477196773/megasweet-did-another-sketch-request-for-me-so-i

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Ice

Ice #1 · Nov 27th, 2011 · · ·

Wow this is a great story fair enough I got confused once or twice but that passed quickly it's amazing.It's not really my thing but I gotta say youve done this exceptionaly well

Master_Ovan

Master_Ovan #2 · Nov 27th, 2011 · · ·

42663 Thank you, It means a lot that you like it!

Ice

Ice #3 · Nov 27th, 2011 · · ·

Wow this is a great story fair enough I got confused once or twice but that passed quickly it's amazing.It's not really my thing but I gotta say youve done this exceptionaly well

Balancer

Balancer #4 · Nov 27th, 2011 · · ·

Try to rape fluttershy.....bear attack

vicunasaber

vicunasaber #5 · Dec 4th, 2011 · · ·

(sob, sob) so sad.
well written, though.

#6 · Dec 4th, 2011 · · ·

*sniff*

Great writing... but so sad... Also I find it interesting that you did not make fluttershy try to commit suicide like happens in so many other fics... i guess im greatful for that

Master_Ovan

Master_Ovan #7 · Dec 5th, 2011 · · ·

51291 For the record I wanted to go with her driving Rarity's horn through her heart so they could be together forever but Tyion wasn't feeling it and as my partner I respected his decision and like how it turned out. So you can thank him ^^

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