After what happened at Sweet Apple Achers, Fluttershy resumed her normal day by day life but during said day she has some weird pulls towards the Everfree until later that night she goes out and finds something small and scared and oddly familiar.
Might redo description due to that... it might suck :/
Takes place after the events of Bats!
The idea came to me some time ago and wanted to do it.
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OOOOOHHHHHHHHHH MI GOD THAT PIC IT TO CUTE AAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWAWAWAWWAWAWAWAWWAWAAWAWAWAWWA
7428979 :3
7429004 =3
This is a very good one-shot.
7429136 ty :)
More?
so cute the D'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww are too much we demand more please
The grammar needs some work, but a well-done concept. Keep at it
7429821 Yeah... my grammar sucks :/
WE ned sum more of dis plz
I love this story already.
Can you please add more to this story I have some ideas that I'm willing to share with you on this story. 
This story is so cute!
7430333 send them through the PM :)
7430701 Do you mean Private Message correct?
I'm very good at understanding what certain things mean. 
7430764 yes
7430912 Okay I'll keep that in mind then.
We want more. MORE!!
7430333 Actually a sequel would be good for this. there are questions to be answered, and "What if"s to be pondered
Hmm... Like 7429821 said, this was an interesting concept, but the grammar leaves much to be desired. I would go through this with an experienced editor—they'll hopefully pick out the big and the small errors and tell you why they need to be changed. I'd offer to help myself, but I have too much on my plate right now.
And like 7431254 said, there are a lot of questions to be answered. There needs to be some more content. I don't know if it needs a full sequel, but some more chapters explaining how certain things came to be would be wise. Plus, Fluttershy explaining main events to her friends? Or better yet, her inability to do so (Until X is revealed, or something of the sort)?
The concept is good, but it needs work. For now, have an upvote for the d'awwwwwws.
7456747 Like I said before... yeah my grammar sucks.
as for to continuing it, I'll get back on that later
we need a bigger story with this kind of concept...
Seriously,ive almost got enough members for a second generation mane 6...
Flutterbat(this story)
Nyx
Rainbow Dash's adopted blind filly.
Screwball
a few more and we have a second mane 6! Um...i guess another would be Nightmare Rarity reborn as Raritys Filly, from that one comic on youtube, Crazy Future.possibly? *shrug*
Either way,we need more Little Flutterbat...
please can you make a sequel to this or at least some random one shots with fillybat?
So.....Flutterbat as Fluttershy's companion?
7913134 Somewhat...
You should definitely continue this. :D
Was Discord behind lil' Flutterbats arrival?
*Acres.
Sweet Apple Acres.
8509175
Damn it!