Thy Nightmare Within I: Eternal Darkness
Our Sister is worshipped like a godly entity that she is not. She is too proud, she will be the destruction of all our subjects. We must stop her, before she leads to our kingdom's downfall. We must stop ourselves. We are not gods. Limelight will take its toll and our Sister will suffer. She must be stopped.
We must be stopped.
Luna's corruption.
Should this be marked as 'Teen' instead?
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Yea
Missing space
It is a bit fast paces, but nonetheless well done. See above the small things you missed.
Great story! I loved how you used the royal we, and I love how you put so much emotion into those words and describe Luna's feelings. Keep it up!
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Thanks for pointing out the errors!
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