Okay so apparently the 'no means no' rule in life doesn't mean jack shit for ponies. If you bugged the shit out of people you either keep saying no, finally cave and say yes, or beat them in a brutal way. Anyways so far so good for the chapter keep up the good work
Yay an update, and just reading this, i remember a fic about a vampire kinaping twi-sci, chaining her and drinking her blood, when sunnet came to the rescue, the vampire proclame that he just drank the blood of a virgin, and now he is 10 times more powerful, then twilight mentioned that she is not a virgin, so sunset shoots and bam, vampire is dead XD, dont know why this came to mind, anyway, good and hot chapter, keep up the good work
I'm more interested in Dai's backstory in Equestria. You wrote he's been there for 4 years...when did he show up, in season 1 (or PRE-season 1, since appx two (or even 3) years of time has passed? And at what point?
Also, given that it currently is occurring in season 6 (since Starlight is there) and Twilight has said humans aren't real, I'm guessing "Equestria Girls" never occurred here.
7556564 If you missed it, Dai's been there since Twilight showed up in Ponyville, so he's been there roughly the same time Twilight has been in Ponyville. So a little bit Pre-Season 1.
And nope, EQG has not happened at all, as I am unsure of what I could possibly do with EQG to begin with. If anyone has any idea what, feel free to share, otherwise, ehh.
I suppose I could write a sort of... what, prequel to all of this. I don't think I can include his entire backstory in this one... maybe, anything is possible Would you be interested in such a story?
Comment posted by HiddenMaster deleted May 29th, 2017
I apologize if the Fourth Wall Breaks are not to your liking, and I appreciate what you;re telling me, but for as long as I've been writing I've included them. I don't use them often in some stories, I usually only throw them in because I think it might entice a giggle or two with people who doenjoy the breaks.
Again, I do apologize and I hope it doesn't disuade you from reading into the story further. I'll try not to include any next chapter, it might be a bit silly but I'll try and refrain from breaking the fourth wall.
7556729 I do enjoy "Humans turned into ponies stories", but the ones where they become fillies/colts (children essentially) are really intriguing. The struggles of going through a new childhood can be enjoyable to read, but then throw in not only being in a new land, but also a different species while retaining their adult personalities (and human mannerisms) and you have the makings for some truly interesting reads.
I'm not really expecting you to go much into his history (creating a spinoff or anything), but IF you wanted to throw in a flashback in a chapter from when he arrived to some of his more "memorable" moments in the series (if he chose to get involved in the shows canon), then I think that could make for an excellent way to have us have a better understanding of him.
Besides, if he's been under Twilight's care for as long as you say, I imagine she must have developed some kind of "big sister" attitude to him...and that must have led to numerous "squabbles" as older and younger siblings tend to have.
But, of course, this is just my 2 cents. Overall it is YOUR story and ho you choose to proceed with it is up to you. But I am intrigued to see where this goes...so I'll keep an eye out.
7557016 You bring up some delicious points, all of which I approve of~ Hahaha. But yeah, I can thrown in plenty of Flashbacks, as I did with the recent chapter. Yeah it was short but it showed a little bit of his past, not a lot but eh.
Memorible moments, brotherly/sisterly type relationship eh? Hmm... that sounds kind of funny, hehehe. I approve.
Well thank you for your two cents dude, I do hope you enjoy any updates I throw out as well as my other stories.
I'm surprised Dai is still so grumpy. You'd think after 4 years of living in this place that he'd be more accepting. Although it is kind of interesting having all the mane six acting as his surrogate moms.
7561239 He's mostly grumpy because Twilight is trying to find his parents, who don't exist in this world, and no one believes his story of him being a Human Navy Seal Sniper. So he's just given up somewhat, and he could be accepting, but this world's ways aren't exactly his cup of tea so to speak.
7556729 I wouldn't do a prequel, myself. It's like super hero origin stories, we've seen them a hundred times and there's only so much you can do with it. I'd stick to the occasional flashback.
So, just so I'm confirmed here. Dai and the Crusaders are around 14 here (physically, in Dai's case)? The original story mentioned he was 10 when he arrived, and it's been 4 years according to your comments here, so that makes 14, right?
7564340 Mmhmm! You got it right, though Sweetie and Scootaloo are a bit younger then Apple Bloom and Dai. Sweetie's like... (if I didn't already write it out and forget) 9-10 years old and Scootaloo's 11-12 years old.
I bet she is going to claim she "found" his parents. Shoot I was thinking those two where going to get caught by Rarity but they lucked out I guess.
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Maaaaaaybe~
Hahaha yeah, they lucked out alright
I wouldn't be surprised if the two lovebirds develop some specific fetishes after this
Okay so apparently the 'no means no' rule in life doesn't mean jack shit for ponies. If you bugged the shit out of people you either keep saying no, finally cave and say yes, or beat them in a brutal way.
Anyways so far so good for the chapter keep up the good work
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Hohoho, they just might, the sick little foals.
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She just really wants to teach him how to fly Hehehe.
Thanks for reading you two, hehehe
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Dang it, thanks for catching those!
I need to make sure my stories are of the utmost quality! Evne if its cloppy!
7555740 your welcome
Yay an update, and just reading this, i remember a fic about a vampire kinaping twi-sci, chaining her and drinking her blood, when sunnet came to the rescue, the vampire proclame that he just drank the blood of a virgin, and now he is 10 times more powerful, then twilight mentioned that she is not a virgin, so sunset shoots and bam, vampire is dead XD, dont know why this came to mind, anyway, good and hot chapter, keep up the good work
7556014
Hehehe, how interesting.
Thanks for reading man, legitness~
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switch'em around
goods
Dai suddenly turned female. and I'm okay with it
Nothing is wrong here, I just find it funny
glad
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Dai let
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Even
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Thanks for the save once more!
Good!
7556264
Damn it! You know what I mean!
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Yep! That's the plan I have!
I'm more interested in Dai's backstory in Equestria. You wrote he's been there for 4 years...when did he show up, in season 1 (or PRE-season 1, since appx two (or even 3) years of time has passed? And at what point?
Also, given that it currently is occurring in season 6 (since Starlight is there) and Twilight has said humans aren't real, I'm guessing "Equestria Girls" never occurred here.
7556564
If you missed it, Dai's been there since Twilight showed up in Ponyville, so he's been there roughly the same time Twilight has been in Ponyville. So a little bit Pre-Season 1.
And nope, EQG has not happened at all, as I am unsure of what I could possibly do with EQG to begin with. If anyone has any idea what, feel free to share, otherwise, ehh.
I suppose I could write a sort of... what, prequel to all of this. I don't think I can include his entire backstory in this one... maybe, anything is possible Would you be interested in such a story?
7556840
I apologize if the Fourth Wall Breaks are not to your liking, and I appreciate what you;re telling me, but for as long as I've been writing I've included them. I don't use them often in some stories, I usually only throw them in because I think it might entice a giggle or two with people who doenjoy the breaks.
Again, I do apologize and I hope it doesn't disuade you from reading into the story further. I'll try not to include any next chapter, it might be a bit silly but I'll try and refrain from breaking the fourth wall.
7556729
I do enjoy "Humans turned into ponies stories", but the ones where they become fillies/colts (children essentially) are really intriguing. The struggles of going through a new childhood can be enjoyable to read, but then throw in not only being in a new land, but also a different species while retaining their adult personalities (and human mannerisms) and you have the makings for some truly interesting reads.
I'm not really expecting you to go much into his history (creating a spinoff or anything), but IF you wanted to throw in a flashback in a chapter from when he arrived to some of his more "memorable" moments in the series (if he chose to get involved in the shows canon), then I think that could make for an excellent way to have us have a better understanding of him.
Besides, if he's been under Twilight's care for as long as you say, I imagine she must have developed some kind of "big sister" attitude to him...and that must have led to numerous "squabbles" as older and younger siblings tend to have.
But, of course, this is just my 2 cents. Overall it is YOUR story and ho you choose to proceed with it is up to you. But I am intrigued to see where this goes...so I'll keep an eye out.
7557016 You bring up some delicious points, all of which I approve of~ Hahaha. But yeah, I can thrown in plenty of Flashbacks, as I did with the recent chapter. Yeah it was short but it showed a little bit of his past, not a lot but eh.
Memorible moments, brotherly/sisterly type relationship eh? Hmm... that sounds kind of funny, hehehe. I approve.
Well thank you for your two cents dude, I do hope you enjoy any updates I throw out as well as my other stories.
Stay tuned everypony!
7560621
Your loss friend
I'm surprised Dai is still so grumpy. You'd think after 4 years of living in this place that he'd be more accepting. Although it is kind of interesting having all the mane six acting as his surrogate moms.
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He's mostly grumpy because Twilight is trying to find his parents, who don't exist in this world, and no one believes his story of him being a Human Navy Seal Sniper. So he's just given up somewhat, and he could be accepting, but this world's ways aren't exactly his cup of tea so to speak.
It is interesting isn't it? hoho
7556729 I wouldn't do a prequel, myself. It's like super hero origin stories, we've seen them a hundred times and there's only so much you can do with it. I'd stick to the occasional flashback.
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Huh... true, true.
I was planning on the Flashbacks anyway, I can't think of how long the Prequel would be so...
Yeah, lots of Flashbacks
So, just so I'm confirmed here. Dai and the Crusaders are around 14 here (physically, in Dai's case)? The original story mentioned he was 10 when he arrived, and it's been 4 years according to your comments here, so that makes 14, right?
7564340
Mmhmm! You got it right, though Sweetie and Scootaloo are a bit younger then Apple Bloom and Dai. Sweetie's like... (if I didn't already write it out and forget) 9-10 years old and Scootaloo's 11-12 years old.
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Me neither, I'm so far behind,
I like this and and on another note. I was like 69 sweet.
My, my. Some naughty sexy times while even Rarity is in the room? What naughty foals they are!
I'm so glad that you made this sequel! And I decided to follow you! This is some rather neat writing there after all!
Really? I can think of one pony who does that exact thing
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hehehehhehehehhehehehheheheh!
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Lol.