Nice. The sexcapade shall be real!

more plz

Major lulz

This is fucking funny as shit.

The cover art is also funny

Hooked immediately

WOW JUST WOW... you sir or ma'am have a very dirty mind

No writer, you just nasty

Hilarious!

That was amazing and beautiful. I must have more soon. The king of Douche-Pricks demands MORE!

that was actually really funny. keep going!

How quickly it could be updated?

I'm curious to see how Anon will conquer and rule these species:
The Deers from the comics:
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With the deers I can imagine King Aspen and his son, Bramble, being something like this to Anon after their first encounter with him:
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The Diamond Dogs
The Minotaurs
The Centaurs like Tirek and his father, King Vorak,:
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The Gargoyles like Tirek 's brother, Scorpan, and their mother, Queen Haydon,:
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The Changelings(I can see Queen Chrysalis and Celestia fighting over Anon)
That all I could think up at the moment but I might post some more species later.

Dude please do more of this XD hadn't had a good laugh like that in a while

Oh my god, such porn! Much wowe! Make more!

>*Insert intelligent sounding horse noises*
>Oh, and his pants are super tight for some reason.
forty keks. Oh wait, i'm not at /mlp/

Yo, what the fuck?

I don't know what this is...

But...

But I think I like it.

Follow Anon as he takes over the ponies, griffons, buffaloes, yanks, dragons and whatever we can think of.

Ah the mysterious yanks such mysterious creatures. Although I assume you meant yaks.

Oh boy. Went to sleep, woke up, and all this now.

Anyway, thanks for the support, have to admit, have been pretty nervous about doing this, like a virgin popping the cherry.

Already working on other chapters, updates should happen once a week or so, because I proofread, edit and proofread again by myself, and to do that I need to sleep on it for a day.

And thanks for S1 (I don't know how to link names )for letting me know how many species there are. For it is only human to fuck thing up, and Anon sure is going to fuck things.

Keep being perverts everyone.

7401821 Ahhh... That explain this.

Celestia lifted her tell so fast

You gonna fix that and double check any error.

I was going to pass this up as anon/HiE garbage.
Username gave me pause.
Godspeed, fellow shitposter.

FUCKING EPIC!

Follow Anon as he takes over the ponies, griffons, buffaloes, yanks, dragons and whatever we can think of.

This made me giggle. I always knew Americans were animals!

Well I like it. Good show old chap.

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Would you like a proofreader?

I'd be happy to slave over your shit.

what have I stumbled upon now?

I never expected this. But now i got a taste for vanilla ice cream.
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Anon sure didn't now what he was doing

CLEARLY HE DIDN'T.

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If you lie to me and dont continue this I will be pissed. Goodbye sir.

Follow Anon as he takes over the ponies, griffons, buffaloes, yanks, dragons and whatever we can think of.

Anon's conquering the Yanks now, huh?
I'll read it in a bit.

wat the hell

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True story.

The cover art is just THE BEST!

Quite interesting.

I was dying of laughter in the middle of it

This amuses me.
I demand further debauchery.

Interesting, Next chapter should be good

found the source for the cover art 8)
Some boop flash

*snort* Pretty funny.

Tracking.

The last place he vaguely remembered were the gates to the big ass park this town had for some reason.

We warned you not to go to the dog park.

Hey dude. The story is not bad, but could really use an editor/proofreader. You've got a good thing going on here, now make it great by removing the tense switching and grammar mistakes. Please. I'm gonna keep reading this but it is a little frustrating the way it is now.

Also, a helpful tip for catching errors on the fly is to read it out loud to yourself (if you speak English as a first language). Just make sure you are alone in the house so nobody walks in on you reading mlp smut. That can be a bit awkward.

The Internet, a place to read and learn

First story, 1615 2247 views in 2 3 days...
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GG M8

I NEED MORE OF THIS IN MY LIFE!!!

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'Grats on the first story.

Hope to see more of this.

Yes I am very interested in the story keep up a good work update more soon.

Absolute hilarity...but you could use some grammatical help

Gotta say for a first story it seems to be great. This looks like it's gonna be a very funny story and hopefully you continue it till completion. Keep up the great work.

-Moar plz-

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TOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*Ded*