The Crystal war has been going on for 4 years, for 4 years, Sombra has been keeping three prisoners in his dungeon. Now the war will finally come to an end, this is the story of Rainbow, Pinkie and their comrades. They have been there since the first days, now they will be there, when Sombra's army falls. This war has cost everypony something, whether it's a limb, a friend, or a family member. Hardened by this war, they grown numb to the idea of death.
Equestria can finally at long last live in peace. Yet, in order to end the war, Celestria must do something she considers deplorable.
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Edit) A few fixes have been made and a character's name changed.
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Just a suggestion, you really need to get an editor for your work. You have a story here, but as a reader I get thrown off each time there is a mistake, and they happen so often. I haven't made it to the end of your story. Certain mistakes ruin immersion and it makes it impossible to get into the story.
Or if you have the time and want to put in the effort yourself, it will help you a lot with writing in the future. The past/present/future tense mistakes in particular throw me off, and I imagine everyone else reading because we have to pause and figure out what you meant, rather then just absorbing the information.
7404704 Thank you for your input, I don't really have anyone I can give my stories to. I usually write stories went I have free time and an idea. So I do the editing myself, I thought I caught most of the mistakes, but I guess I was wrong. I will try and avoid these mistakes in the future.
That was an amazing story to read. Well done and well written/typed.
The writing is bad… a single spellcheck would improve this by a lot.