Dusk Melody
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Silly Griffon, Ponies are for eating. *snicker*
Being native Russian speaker I can't help but notice quite a few mistakes with Russian phrases in your fic. Need some help with that, or "whatever, google translate works, who cares if it looks bad for those who do speak Russian"?
Awesome, keep at it!
I like this story so far.
Why can't cyclone go to canterlot
8083830 In Wildfire: Lighting the Flame, Cyclone, under the influence of potions that regressed her mentally to that of a foal, kissed a two year old filly. As a result, she was exiled from the city rather than jailed.
So far I like this a lot
8083980 I'm glad you do. Anything in particular you like?
As a long long way, I read three chapters I notice that the first chapter was a bit hard to read till you need a google translator... The chapter's self it's alright... ok for the second chapter it is getting to the good part where the stallion and the bird get together I think.... then when chapter 3 it's all sexy but then the stallion heard about his sister in the hospital which was sad... and I hope the three B1tche$ get what they deserve.
The sex goddess now that's new....
8084802 Moonbeak is a typical griffon. She loves to be adored.
8085064 Yea When I saw those goddess lines I was laughing. It's a good story besides the part where it's in Russian. Other than that it's really good.
8085077 Thank you my friend. The russian will be kept to a minimum in future
8085080 try not to keep it to a minimum... Just do your best... That's what makes the story great is to keep the stuff that you are trying to make. Try putting like (/dubs context) <<< something like that so we don't have to you know get a translator. like what they do for the English subs.... Putting it in English in context. like .... for example, "こんにちは、私の名前はライ麦のスノッブです。" (/dubs Hello, my name is rye snoot.)
8085089 I will mate, thanks for the advice
This was an interesting chapter, Star is certainly interesting with wanting to join the police force. I wander how his BDSM activity will interact with his new job. For what I am guessing kinky stuff isn't exactly accepted to the open public. Still I like that there is an actually story behind the sexy stuff . I will be looking forward to see more of this story.
8086704 The sexy stuff NEVER takes precedence over the story. The storyline always comes first. Always.
8086720 glade to hear it
8086724 My co-author wouldn't have it any other way
The next chapter will be published in a couple of weeks or so. This week will see an update to Wildfire 3: The Flame Renewed. Then there's a Wilyverse side story in the planning too.
Interesting to see that they use the premise of his investigation as for the dominances play. I probably missed a lot of info about what's happening with Wildfire fathers, sense I haven't read the main story that much so far.
read the chapter it was interesting not much to say at them moment I have been busy lately. I think showing how both character deal with difficult times with each other is interesting and how it influences their interaction on their master pet play is interesting.looking forward to the next chapter.
hmmmm interesting on the two characters in this chapter it feels like the wind is blowing for the next chapter that will rise.
This was a nice chapter, nice to see that both his lover and her mother to the point that they completely trust him without any reservation and see him as one of their own. Still I wonder where is investigation about the his sister group of rapist are about. Locking forward to the next one.
Always hard to tell where the line is crossed or not. I the more to her not wanting to marry him in the griffin homeland late husband?
8661379
What do you think I crossed the line with my friend?
8661480
No idea, I am not good at testing out limits with people.
Was making Brightstar look like Shining Armor in the picture intentional?
8800483
No, it wasn't.