8083830 In Wildfire: Lighting the Flame, Cyclone, under the influence of potions that regressed her mentally to that of a foal, kissed a two year old filly. As a result, she was exiled from the city rather than jailed.
8085080 try not to keep it to a minimum... Just do your best... That's what makes the story great is to keep the stuff that you are trying to make. Try putting like (/dubs context) <<< something like that so we don't have to you know get a translator. like what they do for the English subs.... Putting it in English in context. like .... for example, "こんにちは、私の名前はライ麦のスノッブです。" (/dubs Hello, my name is rye snoot.)
This was an interesting chapter, Star is certainly interesting with wanting to join the police force. I wander how his BDSM activity will interact with his new job. For what I am guessing kinky stuff isn't exactly accepted to the open public. Still I like that there is an actually story behind the sexy stuff . I will be looking forward to see more of this story.
8086724 My co-author wouldn't have it any other way The next chapter will be published in a couple of weeks or so. This week will see an update to Wildfire 3: The Flame Renewed. Then there's a Wilyverse side story in the planning too.
Why can't cyclone go to canterlot
8083830 In Wildfire: Lighting the Flame, Cyclone, under the influence of potions that regressed her mentally to that of a foal, kissed a two year old filly. As a result, she was exiled from the city rather than jailed.
So far I like this a lot
8083980 I'm glad you do. Anything in particular you like?
The sex goddess now that's new....
8084802 Moonbeak is a typical griffon. She loves to be adored.
8085064 Yea When I saw those goddess lines I was laughing. It's a good story besides the part where it's in Russian. Other than that it's really good.
8085077 Thank you my friend. The russian will be kept to a minimum in future
8085080 try not to keep it to a minimum... Just do your best... That's what makes the story great is to keep the stuff that you are trying to make. Try putting like (/dubs context) <<< something like that so we don't have to you know get a translator. like what they do for the English subs.... Putting it in English in context. like .... for example, "こんにちは、私の名前はライ麦のスノッブです。" (/dubs Hello, my name is rye snoot.)
8085089 I will mate, thanks for the advice
This was an interesting chapter, Star is certainly interesting with wanting to join the police force. I wander how his BDSM activity will interact with his new job. For what I am guessing kinky stuff isn't exactly accepted to the open public. Still I like that there is an actually story behind the sexy stuff . I will be looking forward to see more of this story.
8086704 The sexy stuff NEVER takes precedence over the story. The storyline always comes first. Always.
8086720 glade to hear it
8086724 My co-author wouldn't have it any other way The next chapter will be published in a couple of weeks or so. This week will see an update to Wildfire 3: The Flame Renewed. Then there's a Wilyverse side story in the planning too.