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Krystal Dusk


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With Celestia's death and Luna's disappearance, Twilight and Cadence are forced to shoulder the responsibility of protecting the Kingdom. The battle against the griffons had been long and arduous, but after years of struggle, they are finally about to push the griffons out of Equestria.

But many questions still remains: Why did Celestia die? Where had Luna gone? And what made the griffons decided to attack their pony neighbours to begin with?

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 10 )

What happened to all the comments?

8133401 Wondering that myself. Perhaps I made too many changes to the story, making the previous comments invalid or something...

8134073 I think it's more to do with the fact that when you upload a chapter that was uploaded once already, there is no new notification, or there wasn't, or so I've understood. I've accidentally published chapters before they were finished, had to take them down, and then when I finished and republished it, most people didn't notice, and I've have to publish something else for them to do so.

I think you need to give more back story on everything.

this whole night mare moon thing just screwed everything up. Having her be the true villian in all of this no. this story was more interesting with out that and now it's ruined.

8137283 Glad you enjoyed it enough to read through it all, at least. One more chapter coming up!

Sweetiebell has green magic aura like her eyes

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