On her way to the country of Stalliongrad for a meeting, Princess Celestia's helicopter is supposedly downed by a blizzard. Princess Luna must resume her sister's role as Equestria's leader, unknowing that a force larger than her is at play.
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This looks very interesting (and very depressing), and I am definetely going to be reading it through as soon as I have the chance.
That being said, it is lacking...uh, for lack of a better word, I'll say polish. Particularly with the formatting of dialogue. I'd be happy to highlight my thoughts better in a PM if you'd like. For now, consider me very intrigued.
I like that bit of foreshadowing.
Ah curse it, didnt even finish this chapter and you made my inner slav read the S.T.A.L.K.E.R wiki for a hour before returning here to finish the chapter.
nigga this ain't right.