oh you clever clever mofo

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Like I said, Dusk already won. I'm just showing how life is under his rule
Plus he probably read the rules for being a successful overlord

7556900 so when do we see the princesses all we've seen so far are the elements also if this is dusk is shining also genderbent to female if so where is she at, he said celestia and luna already belong to him but wheres cadance

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The princesses and armor (male) will be in the next chapter.

Great chapter, can't wait for more.

Some things I spotted (sorry I'm being really anal sounding):

"Then I see no other choice." Dusk responded, magically pushinv yhe Feral away, who then fled the room like a frightened animal. "Applejack, see Umbra about rewarding you for your services, I shall take it from here."

-'pushing' and 'the'
you might have just pressed the wrong key when typing. That usually happens from time to time.

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Thanks, i spent 20 mins editing this on my phone during break at work.

7557121 Wow, I could never edit anything I write on a phone, and no problem I just like to help.
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I see Umbra doesn't mind her king having a harem. You'd think she'd be more possessive of him.

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You're talking about Fall of Equestria right?

I only noticed two spelling errors One right off the bat and then one in the middle. Good work though.