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Wander Hoof


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An ordinary week for Zecora gets turned into something special when a foalhood friend from the Savanna abruptly decides to move to Ponyville. The week then becomes something stranger when she learns a secret he had been keeping from her since before she left; and it gets weirder when she meets his bizarre "Beloved". Zecora feels that she can handle this, but can Ponyville?

Rated teen for some mild gore and carnivore culture in some later chapters and for mild sexual themes including inter-special relationships.

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Comments ( 8 )

That cover image scares me...? :applejackconfused:

Hmm...
I'll keep an eye on this, but that's all I can promise for now.
I do like the idea, I just hope you don't make a mess of it.

Sounds interesting....
I await moar!:twilightsmile:

790952 Well, feel free to give me pointers if you feel it could be better, it has been a while since I last wrote a story, so I am a little rusty... :twilightsheepish:

791124
Well the main thing is moving to a new line when a different character speaks. Even if it's just one word. ESPECIALLY if it's just one word.
Read through the chapter a few times before posting it, too. In my experience, little things get missed unless you go over things with a fine-toothed comb.
Maybe a bit more description?

791131 Duly noted! :twilightsmile: I'll make sure of that from now on.

Seem good so far. :pinkiesmile:

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