I am the coolest white girl bronie you guys will ever meet! Or not, all my friends compare me to Fluttershy because, shy and sweet, loves animals, animals love me. Also a pony artist, hit me up.
Her lifetime dream was to become a veterinarian. He just wanted a second chance to start again. Neither of them thought this would happen, but it did. Now what? Just Keep Calm and Fall in Love.
Celestia's new Villian Reformation Program has put Sam in quite the predicament when three former villians are placed in his care. His efforts to lead a simple life with his marefriend are put to the test when new feelings begin to emerge.
This isn’t how I wanted things to go. I never wanted to hurt anyone. Unfortunately for me, I have four villains in my head. And they say I am going to be the next one.
Okay, this story seems interesting. Gotta say that it was interesting to see Sombra interview the different mares who came to have the maid position. Also, it's refreshing to see Fluttershy openly checking out Sombra as opposed to other fics where she is too timid to check a stallion out. Have a fav.
There's a few grammar errors here and there but...this could be a good start. The next few chapters will probably determine everything though. Otherwise, this is really good.
Its so interesting and i love Sombrashy too XD im so exited to read more from this eheheheh its prety rare to read up Sombrashy on Mlp since not much of the writers made this its soooo awesome XD!!!!!
Not bad of a story. It's got potential. Also you have my attention. I mean grammatically speaking, you need some work. A proof reader if you will. I could edit your story a little if you would let me. Give me a reply if you're interested.
Okay, this story seems interesting. Gotta say that it was interesting to see Sombra interview the different mares who came to have the maid position. Also, it's refreshing to see Fluttershy openly checking out Sombra as opposed to other fics where she is too timid to check a stallion out. Have a fav.
Interesting premise. So Sombra has retired and looking for a maid to mind his estate. Good start.
There's a few grammar errors here and there but...this could be a good start. The next few chapters will probably determine everything though. Otherwise, this is really good.
Human tag is unnecessary. Anthro is enough.
Its so interesting and i love Sombrashy too XD im so exited to read more from this eheheheh its prety rare to read up Sombrashy on Mlp since not much of the writers made this its soooo awesome XD!!!!!
Not bad of a story. It's got potential. Also you have my attention. I mean grammatically speaking, you need some work. A proof reader if you will. I could edit your story a little if you would let me. Give me a reply if you're interested.