791525 "Find a need and fill it." That's my motto. Technically, my motto is "Find a [Blank] and fill it." I replace the 'blank' with a noun appropriate to the situation.
795802 Are you taking about Straight Lace? Yeah. He's definitely the more sadistic of the guards. We'll just have to wait and see if he gets his comeuppance in future installments.
>"I don't care if you light her up like a Hearth's Warming tree," Straight Lace said, "Just promise me that when I do her up the butt it won't feel like I'm sticking a fork in a light socket." pissed myself
797521 Thanks for the feedback The fun thing about extreme stories like this is you get to write dialog that feels perfectly natural in context, but just sounds bizarre anywhere else.
922538 Yeah, after reading this story you could probably tell I'm a little Abby Normal myself. It bears mentioning that the later chapters of this story with be undergoing some rewrites with new chapters being inserted as well. Enjoy the story as is, but feel free to check back later to see how it expounds.
I'll admit I laugh at some of this, and want to stab at least one of them with a knife other times. Part of me wonders if they'll somehow un-crazy her by doing this by accident.
Huh. I think I finally found my heart. Never thought I'd see it again. That very last bit, just... fucking ow. My feels. Think I'm going to check out here.
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"Find a need and fill it." That's my motto.
Technically, my motto is "Find a [Blank] and fill it." I replace the 'blank' with a noun appropriate to the situation.
795802
Are you taking about Straight Lace? Yeah. He's definitely the more sadistic of the guards. We'll just have to wait and see if he gets his comeuppance in future installments.
>"I don't care if you light her up like a Hearth's Warming tree," Straight Lace said, "Just promise me that when I do her up the butt it won't feel like I'm sticking a fork in a light socket." pissed myself
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Thanks for the feedback
The fun thing about extreme stories like this is you get to write dialog that feels perfectly natural in context, but just sounds bizarre anywhere else.
giggity?
As soon as i read Pavlov, my mind was full of piccolo from tfs dragon all z abridged screaming "Curse you Pavlov!"
797541 Says the man who wrote about fucking mental patients....
Sedagive!!! Bwahahahaha!!! I totally know what your talking about! Loved that movie!
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Yeah, after reading this story you could probably tell I'm a little Abby Normal myself.
It bears mentioning that the later chapters of this story with be undergoing some rewrites with new chapters being inserted as well. Enjoy the story as is, but feel free to check back later to see how it expounds.
Thanks for the feedback!
.Damn you and your comedy! It's hard to clop while laughing!
922581 The name is pronounced Fronkinsteen!!
I love the mad scientist aspect of this chapter...it's just amazing.
Ahhh, Shocker, you're a mad genius after my own heart.
That's not electroconvulsive therapy. That's shock aversion therapy. Fix it.
Also, it is still used. It is just regulated heavily, though.
You know, I wouldn't mind if they where a bit nicer to her, but I love the story stil so far
I'll admit I laugh at some of this, and want to stab at least one of them with a knife other times. Part of me wonders if they'll somehow un-crazy her by doing this by accident.
Huh. I think I finally found my heart. Never thought I'd see it again. That very last bit, just... fucking ow. My feels. Think I'm going to check out here.
I understood that reference