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So you have inherited KSR's story on FanFiction? Nice. I enjoyed it until he pretty much left the story up for adoption. I hope you do a good job, and it seems like you got a good feel for it so far...
7361165 well i might need help but ill do my best
Truthfully I've been reviewing KSR Saints row story awhile back In Fanfiction.
Good luck on the story and hoping to see more batshit crazy, action pack , gun blazing ADVENTURE! plus a little sexy time.
Here. Have a group.
*Goes back to trying to get Gat Out Of Hell to work on his PS3*
Tense issues, capitalisation issues, puzzling sentences... The potential for this fic is there, but it needs work.
Hope to see more
Hey er just asking but are ocs allwed for bits i mean i tecnicly only own 2 but my sis allows me to use them for family relathions i.e heres are my mains sisters anyway off topic but i think they could help with spikes training and the harmony angles seeing as my mains a expert at recon.and stealh hes sisters ones a armour wepon and explosive expert the others a medic thats if u want them that is
7362895 sound like a interesting idea PM me what they look like and show their profile
7363056 I think this is going to be a great story I always like the game saints row and seeing it in here I can tell this is going to be AWESOME. Don't let any tell you otherwise anyways I'm just trying to show some support for this story. Keep going with this story please I think, I'm going to enjoy this.
7365119 thank you man i will try
That was fucking awesome!
but there is some name's and word's that was un-cap.
7365190 Question is this a harem story
7365636 well I never did one but yes it is
So...who's the mare that gave Spike a kiss of thanks? All we know is that she's the one that was about to be beaten by that Diamond Dog boss, and that she's a unicorn and pink (I think). that pony an oc or somepony we may know in the future?
EDIT: she has pink silky hair and a light purple (I think maybe lavender) coat. Any know background ponies like that, or is that just an OC?
7366295 just a oc
It can be a good story but you really either need to re-read what you wright or get an editor.
Demur Signing Off
Time for some action!
My advice to you is to go over these two chapters and make some corrections then re-post them.
Personally, I never played the Saint's Row games, being more of a GTA guy myself (though the last GTA game I played was Chinatown Wars).
Also I was the one that gave him the idea to continue my story that like many other was cancelled! I resubmitted back to hidden but if ya want proof I'll show it again.
7460311 hey can you help me with a fight scene?
7460665 sure PM me!
how dose the progress of the 3 chapter look?
7573614 it's getting their but I'm at job Corp and they don't got a signal over here so it will take longer
Hmmm who is this mystery mare?
7822307 it a mystery
7822311 eh fell into that one. though with the phoenix she has with her i have a strong guess who it is.
Don't worry about it and condolences for you father, I hope you'll get better everyday and overcome it.
I wish you great health and fortune in the future.
7822500 thanks man thats thoughtful of you
Sorry for you loss *hugs
what will happen now?
who are we gone to see next?
one of the remaning main 6 or one of the background character,Who knows.
but we do know that it's only two mares left that fight the other gangs.
7822828 thank you
7822864 don't worry your in for a suprise as pinkie always says
Sorry for the loss I'm glad you doing better keep it up
7832731 thank you my friend
Two years in the making. I'm just glad you updated.
Hope Spike get some action soon "Physical" means hehhehehe.
I take it from that last line, Fluttershy's coming, and Rarity's gonna be the last, since if this is like the one on FanFiction, Rarity has to be "persuaded" to join....
Great chapter I hope that griffin join
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thanks
Wouldn't it be pretty interesting if Spike has a Phoenix as a pet, similar to a character that I REALLY hope is in this story... (Yes this comes from the last couple of lines in the previous chapter...)
And of course if she's there, there has to be the other half of that equation as well....
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im still thinking but their will be a good story out of it and thanks for the idea
Good story and what next chapter ? Rarity or Fluttershy ?
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I'm just in a writer block I'm sorry its taking so long.
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If your still having writers block, do you need help?
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Yea I may need some
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You want me to PM you some?
Still nothing? Guess was too much from us
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Hey sorry just forgot about this and life's been crazy
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Yeah
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Crazy huh.