A Warrior, a Preistess and a Thief need a Magician to open a very important underground vault. The Magician they get isn't anything they expected. Or wanted. But they have to deal with him, anyway, as he's their Sol chosen champion. Faust help them.
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Good job keep it up
I was not expecting the arrow to the knee joke. Nice touch.
Ah, the tournament episode! That was always my favorite from the "Louie, the Rune Soldier" anime.
Sky blaze is gonna get it given to him...
The chaoter was good. Glad to see Pinkie cares so much about End to marry him and be concerned about his condition. I laughed when I read about Dash's stunt as a maid.
Wait wait wait a damn minute there's a competition of strength what Applejack can earn money and it has already been established well that Applejack's needs money for granny Smith's medication or whatever and this story is pretty interesting and I'm going to continue reading it but but honestly I don't see why Applejack and rainbow dash considered him a friend now and I feel like you miss the opportunity to make their friendship seem real when they were on the ship they could have interacted more during that time to make sure the friendship seems more real and also why haven't we seen him in a fight up until now in all honest it's still good story but I feel like that you are going through it way too quickly and not actually showing him to be competent and this is just my opinion it's still a good story though