A Warrior, a Preistess and a Thief need a Magician to open a very important underground vault. The Magician they get isn't anything they expected. Or wanted. But they have to deal with him, anyway, as he's their Sol chosen champion. Faust help them.
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Okay, it's nice to see Blossomforth back off and decide to get know End better and it's sweet to see that Shy is willing to connect with End...though Fluttershy transforming into Flutterbat during sex was quite the twist ending. Hope the next chapter comes soon to see how they'll solve this conundrum.
Well. That was HOT! Soooo. How does she change back? She will change back right?
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Love lot fo love, and hugs and kissing, and rubbing nd grinding, cuddling, youching caressing and more kissing and then talking, sweet words and more kissing and touching and sex, with pussy grinding, and touching and more sex, and more tlking and more sex and sex and sex....
It'll be a dirty job but someone got to do it.
Hah i remember cheers from the 90's, ahh the best decade ever, vhs was still top tech, my moms windows 98, that we had till 2005, and bunny rabit antennas.
Keep up the awesome work.
7421087 not THAT much of a twist. Remember, she still had the fangs at the end of THAT episode.
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Nuf said
7423080 PS. Angry Flutterbat
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Hoo boy, lots of stuff to go over.
First: Good to see Blossomforth is gonna go slow for now, as... exciting as it would be to have her be the overly thirsty girl in the group, we already have three mares that take that role. (more on that later.)
Second: The scene with Endy talking about his origins was great, lots of emotional play there. (even though the "my parents are deeeeeaaaaaaaaad!!!!" trope is kinda cliché by now, but I digress)
Third: And this is where the majority of my problems with this chapter lie: Endy not being more insistent with Fluttershy on the "why" aspect of her suddenly going thirsty AF, I would think that Endymion being as sexually active and as strong as he is perceived to be would be able to see her advance and stop it before it starts. Furthermore, I would also think he would at least get consent from his two future wives AND a proper explanation for Fluttershy's actions before doing the horizontal mambo with their best friend, the scene just felt rushed.
However, absolutely NONE of this is meant to bash on your story, it is still a great read and I eagerly await how Endy will get himself out of this jealousy love triangle...
I'm various forms of confused...is Endy human? Story doesn't really say and comments say otherwise.
Halp
Things are starting to get a bit BATTY!
7425400 Yes, Endymion is indeed human. Any other questions?
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Naw, man thanks for answering....however...
MUSIC!
[youtube=https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=zh1ajZ9_j28]
7427850 Not a song I like, but it's appropriate for the situation at hoof.