• Member Since 13th Feb, 2016
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Magenta Gleam


I write horse words and stuff.

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When faced with the future of trying to cope with living a life in a new world, one so different from his own Anon needs to find a way to cope with this world full of eternally happy pastel ponies.

Maybe he can find something to cheer him us and make the days pass more easily with a little 'harmless' fun.

Warning: Comedic human on pony violence, flutterape references and Anon.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 5 )

Anon just got moon punted. Like.

A few grammar issues, and it felt weird that the narration was so formal when the dialogue for our narrator was so angry, but it didn't take away from the humorous premise. Good job, dude.

I'd recommend doing a re-read for grammar though, in your attempt to keep a formal voice, there's some weird inaccuracies.

It is 5:48 am, and I am at work, waiting for my shift to start.
This is exactly what I needed. Thank you. XD

I thought she'd spin abound and kick him with both hind legs into next week.

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