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Recon


I play too many video games.

Comments ( 46 )

Never seen this pairing before. Good job!

782404 exactly what I was thinking! What would you call it...VinylDash? :rainbowhuh:

Ooooh, Best Pony with Second Best Non Musician Pony!
I'll read later.

inb4OMFGTHEYARENTREDUN00B
This actually aroused me. :raritydespair:
Ah who am I kidding I enjoy it.

Not too bad, though you do have some issues with grammar here and the-

"She stretched her arms and legs"

arms

arms

:facehoof:

It'd be weird if the Pegasus was fluttershy...

Not bad, not bad at all!:trixieshiftright:

I was intrigued. I wanted it to work. But there were too many awkwardly worded phrases and typos... You really should have gotten this edited, it could have been brilliant! Ah well. A for effort, as they say.

782849
782449

Read the paragraph where she first sees Dash again. ^.^

And, any tips to improve?

783097

No one wants to edit/proofread for me :fluttershysad:

783100 audigeeks.com/forums/Smileys/audigeeks/suicide.gif

Jokes aside I seriously wish for you to rot and suffer in the pits of hell for all eternity.

Best pony with second best musician pony:pinkiehappy:

783139

Love you too!

783724 I hate that feeling when you're so pissed off and depressed as fuck that you could literally rip the meat from a persons spine that you recently yanked from his back with your teeth but then you forget about it for like an hour, and then when you remember you feel really bad and regretful about it.

"Wait are you le-"
"Yeah."
"Cool."
I lol'd. :rainbowlaugh:

Gah, Someone beat me to my RainbowScratch pairing!!!!! NO!!!!

783010 makes sense. I like it...and so does Dashie:rainbowwild:

782433 ScratchieDashie

Fuck y'all if you think that's not totally accurate. It rhymes and is adorable, so that's what I'm going with.

782433

Rainbow Scratch

"No, Dashie," she said, generating that name for her out of nowhere. The mention of it seemed to interest Dash. "Something really fun."
"Sonic Rainbooms?"

Sexually-Oblivious Rainbow.

finally read it. i has a wingboner nao :rainbowwild:

Epic win. :D

isn't moonshine illegal :pinkiegasp:
but great paring by the way

I used to say 'wtf brain' when i felt like reading clop.
then i learned to live with it, and then i made everyone reading this think it was gonna be an 'arrow in the knee' joke :pinkiehappy:

Cool story, Bro! :twilightsmile:

-Giggity's, Giggity's everywhere! As far as the eye can see!:rainbowwild:

Tanqueray is gin, not whiskey.

783010
That....sound like an STD

958460 Huh... never thought of it like that before....

I don't think I should ever try writing clop again. Ever.

Great story just on thing vinly's eyes arn't red there the same color as Rainbows but who cares what color the eyes are right now Great story. Nightshade and I are happy:pinkiehappy:

>red
Well, there's my approval.

782433
DJ-3
(As in, dj-dash-3)

There are minor spelling mistakes and the part where they enter the hotel room didn't make much sense to me and I had to read it several times. :twilightoops: Other then so, the story is very cute!

2 best ponies + clopfic = love from me :heart:

Wow, very cute little story. I love Vinyl and I definitely love Dash, so this was quite the treat.

~SolidFire

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