I'm very glad you enjoyed it! That is what I was agonizing over for a very long time; I wanted to capture that sense of them being alive and into each other, without just mechanically showing a sex scene. I wanted their love to burn like a fire and stir the reader's emotions.
I also wanted this to be a soothing, healing balm to the one who reads it.
I actually spent some time crying over their passionate dialogue, it was so touching, it seemed to me.
I wanted to get this chapter out quickly so I didn't get to expand on their next romantic interlude, but they aren't done. Look out for their next moves. It will be great.
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I'm very glad you enjoyed it! That is what I was agonizing over for a very long time; I wanted to capture that sense of them being alive and into each other, without just mechanically showing a sex scene. I wanted their love to burn like a fire and stir the reader's emotions.
I also wanted this to be a soothing, healing balm to the one who reads it.
I actually spent some time crying over their passionate dialogue, it was so touching, it seemed to me.
I wanted to get this chapter out quickly so I didn't get to expand on their next romantic interlude, but they aren't done. Look out for their next moves. It will be great.