hmm...admittedly you could add in the motions of her massaging him, get into more detail as to losen his knots-- and hit the sweet spots. don't know why you used time skip so quickly, but it was a decent fic.
7329367 I'm hot from all this guy on zebra action foreplay. Loving the way she's got him squirming under her touch. Plus this is the only fic were the main character isn't white or black.
Read quite a few and most of them have the same racial ethnicity.
Plus the anthro zebra with good assets make this whole fic.
7334084 huh, look at that. A fic with the main character that's Mexican, and with such realism of his struggles as an alien outcast within the first chapter.
Not gonna lie ,it seems unorthodox, but I like it because of that.
hmm...admittedly you could add in the motions of her massaging him, get into more detail as to losen his knots-- and hit the sweet spots. don't know why you used time skip so quickly, but it was a decent fic.
7326059
Thanks!
It was a surprise Present, so I wanted to get it out the door quickly.
I'll probably do a George Lucas type thing and expand on it later.
7326066 okay. still it's not a bad fic...just a 'meh' to me.
7326086
Say, man, the most important thing is that you read it. For that I thank you.
Hope you stick around for more.
7326095
Thank you very much, birthday boy. :3
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7326118
Imgur no werk on FIMfic bruh
7326122 I hate this site.
"Lewd, but I approve."
7326131
Yaaaaaey.
7326097 maybe, have other things to do you know. But thanks for the watch...even if it was just giving my opinion.
What does this have to do with MLP? How is this any different from just a random anthro furry fic?
7327049
I shall make my drift apparent in the next chapter, Sir Meeeeeeester, have no fear.
7327052
Then you can resubmit it when that chapter is done.
7327056
I had actually intended on including these details in the first chapter, but I derped and got carried away by the HOT SAIX.
Sorry. Dumb of me, I know. The idea is that she gives Ponyville residents intense sexual massages, like in the Japanese Animes.
I thought I had made this clear, but I apparently got more into the SAIX.
NOW LET'S DO THE SAIX (just kidding)
7327056
ALSO OMFG MEEESTER COMMENTED ON MUH STORY. I ARE FIMFIC CELEBRITY.
I am so freaking hot right now.
7329328
Wut u say
[Wiggly EYEBROWS]
7329367 I'm hot from all this guy on zebra action foreplay. Loving the way she's got him squirming under her touch. Plus this is the only fic were the main character isn't white or black.
Read quite a few and most of them have the same racial ethnicity.
Plus the anthro zebra with good assets make this whole fic.
7334026
http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Burst
Check this guy's fics out sometime if that sort of thing tickles your pickle. You'll love him.
7334084 huh, look at that. A fic with the main character that's Mexican, and with such realism of his struggles as an alien outcast within the first chapter.
Not gonna lie ,it seems unorthodox, but I like it because of that.