Twilight is being accused of being to boring so she decided to prove to everyone how not boring and one sided she is
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I have a Youtube Channel with the same name...... Go watch it......... or dont........... you dont have to............. there is nothing more to this message.............. why are you still reading?
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It feels like a canon episode from Season 1, when Twilight still had rampant psychotic tendencies.
Well done!
Thumbed up!
The concept is good, but the spelling and spacing are in need of a proofreader or editor.
7330768 believe me, i didnt want the spacing either but it needed to happen or else it wouldnt be approved.
And the spelling is because im dutch so my english is a little of but still pretty good
7330215 I was going for a Season 1 - Season 2 vibe and was thinking to myself, what could be a real episode?
Seeing a comment like this makes me think i succeded in what i was trying to accomplish.
Thank you for being so kind and for reading the story.
Did you wrote this with smartphone? Because it seems you are using capital letter when it doesn't be needed and vice versa. Also, there is no "apostrophe". If you're using keyboard, it's at the left side of enter key. Finally, I think putting a period(.) at the end of the sentence is worldwide grammar, so that is that.
There is big difference between "I'm not good at English grammar because English is not my mother language." and "I don't care about grammar because I'm too lazy to double check my writings."
Sorry about being harsh but I'm not from the country using English normally either so show us at least you are trying.