Can Shadow Eclipse overcome the feelings she has for this mare, more so since this mare is not only royalty, but one of her own sister's that she stayed in hiding to avoid all the prissy nobles or will she give in and do the taboo of incest?
Thanks, but I'm gonna be slow on posting the chapter's, my only laptop desided to stop working so gonna have to wait. But I'm not gonna stop the story.
I was interested in this story, till I read the part of the description about Hermaphrodite Alicorns.... That stuff turns me off, I'm not saying I hate the story or anything, I'm sure its good, but.... I've never been into stories that involve Futanari.
Shadow Eclipse. A character named Shadow Eclipse... an alicorn, trying to land Celestia and Luna.
Now, I'm all for futa, so that's not the problem. But the "long lost third alicorn sister" thing is done to hell and back, even established authors don't get carte blanche for that anymore. Then the OC alicorn... also tired as hell, have to be a very good and possibly established writer to get away with that. But the "My edgy-named OC alicorn gonna fuck the Princesses!" is perhaps one of the oldest and most hated tropes in the writing community we have here. Hell, even before FIMFIC we were tired of it.
Please feel free to try again. With a story bearing more substance.
I'm in shock with the dislike of this story if people don't like it don't read it is think your story is getting very interesting to read keep up a good work update soon
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alicorn OC
get rekt
Thanks, but I'm gonna be slow on posting the chapter's, my only laptop desided to stop working so gonna have to wait. But I'm not gonna stop the story.
I was interested in this story, till I read the part of the description about Hermaphrodite Alicorns.... That stuff turns me off, I'm not saying I hate the story or anything, I'm sure its good, but.... I've never been into stories that involve Futanari.
I bid you adieu.
This has to be a trollfic.
It's like a checklist of things not to do in a story.
Shadow Eclipse. A character named Shadow Eclipse... an alicorn, trying to land Celestia and Luna.
Now, I'm all for futa, so that's not the problem. But the "long lost third alicorn sister" thing is done to hell and back, even established authors don't get carte blanche for that anymore. Then the OC alicorn... also tired as hell, have to be a very good and possibly established writer to get away with that. But the "My edgy-named OC alicorn gonna fuck the Princesses!" is perhaps one of the oldest and most hated tropes in the writing community we have here. Hell, even before FIMFIC we were tired of it.
Please feel free to try again. With a story bearing more substance.
I'm in shock with the dislike of this story if people don't like it don't read it is think your story is getting very interesting to read keep up a good work update soon
Hey!!! STFU alright I think this story is amazing if you don't know how to say something nice than don't say fucking anything at all