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Twilight has great needs. Only The Great and Powerful Trixie is equal to them~

Can't wait to see what else you come up with for this wonderful story. :twilightsmile:

7295920 pretty sure it means twilight fills her so much that her stomach explodes. Something that has pushed me away from the story.

She going to digest all that and get even sexier? Will all that cum go to her breast ass and Dick.

Hey pal, you forgot the anthro tag

As a filthy filthy fellow who only comments on stuff he really likes, good job.

Interesting......... Seems Trixie's mind has been broken & reprogramed.
Will this be elaborated on in future chapters?

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Thanks for the heads-up! It's fixed now.

In the description:

boss's

Drop the extra 's'. It should just be boss', which is the possessive noun. What you've got is a contraction for "boss is".

I'm not really a huge fan of bimbo fetishes but my god this clopfic mon....

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Comment posted by Sonic Derpboom deleted Jun 12th, 2016

Took me a second to make sure this wasn't Maids and Mistresses

One time i went to the zoo with my boyfriend and I asked.

"Why does that elephant have 5 legs" I asked, he was about to reply until i suddenly nod, finally realizing what the '5th leg' is.

"Nevermind, it's just the dick- damn that's massive"

Congrats on the feature, really interested where this is going.

Altough, I noticed one thing:

it could take as little as a hour or two for her burdened sack to with a healthy gallon of cum, then more and more with passing minute.

Feels like a verb's missing in between "to with".

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Thanks for spotting that! It's fixed now.

7299668 XD I love looking at ramdom fics comments

Definitely feels like a collaboration with Phurie. And by that I mean HNNNNNNG...

Heh, the porn norms and tropes are strong in this one xD
Seems like you managed to do the pandering quite well seeing the votes though :P

Hm, btw: "Femdom" is an incorrect tag, unless it actually has femdom in it. Genderswapping a female into a (guessing hyper? and probably species swapped too.) futa doesn't count ;3
And, just guessing by experience, and approximately 95+ % of all content of the sort on this site: it's not the female that will be in charge/dominant, it will be the futa. As for some reason, most people don't know how to pussy x3 And instead can only write/draw dicks as dominant~ But yeah, not that many fics with possibly popping in them. Good work on the description for this ^^

And like most stories with plurie related stuff this is either on hiatus or forgoten

November 20th this is the day we are so pose to get the next chapter. Let's see of anything happens.

Half a ton is her right nut♪
Half a ton her left one too♪
Emptying her cum in her empty tummy♪
♪Pop- Goes the bim-bo♪

Comment posted by Writefag4 deleted Sep 6th, 2017

Ok i kinda hope you make a chapter where she popped the rest of the mane 6 and the cutie mark crusaders and brought them back.

Uh, is getting blowing up by cum more pleasurable or painful?

Twilight NEEDS to get her own in the end.
This is sociopathic behaviour and literal enslavement.

Trixie is fighting a losing battle she can't win.

I'm hoping twilight rezzes her with ever bigger curves than before and less brain

7742700 i was thinking twilight would do something to the new body so twilight could really let loose on her. Finally having a pony to release all her backed up cum into.

Personally I'm more into the cum pouring out of their mouth they were filled so much rather than them just bloating that big, but it was still hot.

7742700 will she explode a 2nd time or will the new trixie actually be able to take it all and is feeling like heaven all the way?

Well, at least this is somewhat tame enough to not make this 'climax' any gorier than it already is.

...is Twi a serial killer? Heck, I don't remember you ever having killed a character in your stories before, or at least the ones on fimfic.

Also, noticed some things:

And her curvy playmate moaned in simply, mindless pleasure.

Simple, methinks.

Trixie gave herself a magical boost in ramming, becoming almost a purple blur, nuts swollen much further than before in anticipation for a much larger load.

Unless you meant Twilight here, I am wildly confused.

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Thanks for spotting these! Just let me know if you'd ever like more stuff to preread!

This was a fun read. I love over-the-top stories like this particularly when you find out it's not as life-threatening as it appeared

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