Ah, yes. "Reapers." Immortal robot-humans allegedly living in deep space. I, Celestia, have dismissed that claim.

790934 Not sure if trolling, or being misunderstood.

Da fuq did I just read?

I'm grinning so hard I have mouth cramps

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Trust me if you're grinning hard now wait until the next chapter.

You know what, I going to like this.

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I like it.

ME GUSTA! Can't wait for the next chapter! HUMANITY SHALL PREVAIL!

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The next chapter shall not disapoint, I promise you that.

its nice some spelling mistakes but nothing vary bad, keep it up

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Yeah I found ANOTHER spelling and grammer checker, hopefully this one works.

love it,
post the next chapter soon!
anyway good chapter

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If everything goes according to plan it should be Tuesday-Wensday, because Saturday's and Sunday's tend to be hectic for me.

Oh man this is going to be good the ponies stand no chance against the combined might of Humanity and the Reaper's.

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good, good
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mayby it seems like tia did the same to the reaper's, mayby?

anyway luckymo777 who do you think the best human "sci fi" race

For me is
1 The tau'ri after unending
2 is the Systems Alliance
3 Star fleet

Hard to say i just got into the sci fi genre so i will have to get back to you on that. but if i had to name one the entire galactic fleet of all the races in citadel space.

Bruh.

Why do you put spaces in between the quotes and the words?

The fuck.

Anyway, seems pretty good so far. I'm probably not gonna stick around for the whole thing, but hell, it's worth a shot.

Faved.

man dude do you have enough famous game character's you have james heller from prototype 2
prescott from gears of war and commander sheperd from mass effect you should try to add marcus fenix and dom

Wait is humanity the reapers or the squid things or a collaboration inbetween both races? Also HUMANITY AND SQUID THINGS SHALL PREVALE. SCREW EVIL PONYS

See No Evil.
For We Shall Kill Them From A Distance
Hear No Evil
For We Will Never Sucum To Their Lies
Be No Evil
For We Would Rather Die Then Convert

ORAH!

Also, Faved! Think of It as Thanks for Your Fave on Love and Radiation.

791932 Daedalus class FTW!!!
sgvst.wiki-site.com/images/4/45/Odyssey.jpg

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the most epic ship know to man

796568 And the most complex inspiration for a card model. I still haven't finished putting it together after 1 year.

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???
what?

796596 I found a papercraft based on the Daedalus online. It's a 12 page build and I'm almost done, but it's complicated as hell.

wow
omfg that sound cool

cant wait for the next chapter when is it

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If all goes according to plan it should be Tuesday to Wednesday. Of course that's a rough estimate. As a concelation though you get a apocalypse tank schematic.

...Two hundred and fifty men and women per Ark? That seems a bit...small...

(O, hai there, by the way.)

As for actual constructive criticism... Well, the flow seems awkward, there are several continuity errors, I can't tell who is saying what at some points (use dialogue tags damnit), you lack exclamation points where they seem to be necessary, and some of the dialouge seems a bit wooden.

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Wowowowowowait. Reapers. Taking. Pity? Or was I just miscomprehensing it?

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Technically yes and no. It will be explained in the next chapter. Just think of the cycle.

she broke the cycle
she must die
the vendetta must be paid

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Trust me there will be GORE. And the second chapter is now going through my Beta Reader. So pray to Talos that it doesn't have a lot of errors. if it doesn't it shouldn't take long.

Firing the moar cannon in 3, 2, 1,

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!

faved watched and liked.

Just as an FYI, I will be going on vacation for a week. So don't expect updates anytime soon.

I suddenly have a mental image of some fanfic-plotwagon-StarGate thing happening, with one of the Emperor of Mankind's spacecruisers coming across the ark.

"THESE XENOS DID WHAT TO HOLY TERRA?!"

Dead interesting kick-off, and I can't wait to see how it spins out with how Earth progresses while they are absent, how their new sponsors affect things, and how they assault Celestia's empire.

With that level of tech, they could possibly just tow asteroids to orbit Earth, and drop them with great precision on high priority targets. Celestia is at the bottom of a massive gravity well, and they are not.

Reaper destroyer + Celestia and her army = Totally screwed ponies

You? Writing a TCB fic? This is going to end well.

i.imgur.com/EFIFQ.jpg

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Don't fret the next chapter should be out soon, after I make some modifications.

Stalin approves

Update now and he will approve even more.

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Don't worry Comrade Stalin, by the end of the week the story will be updated!

This chapter, I like it...
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ANOTHER!

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Don't worry, as long as there arn't any error 502's and 404's this week it should be out soon. I hope...

1080067 502's and 504's.... That's TCB!Celestia keeping us from having her head in a silver plate!

REAPERS! BURN THE PLANET!

ORDER THROUGH CHAOS!
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BTW: I have normaly have about 3 backups for the stuff I write, just in case the evilness that is 502 shows up. You should do too

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Hopefully the valient forces of Harbinger will put a laser beam in her plan!

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SupremeSoviet: Go, Shepard-Harbinger!
Shepard-Harbinger used 'Shepard-Harbinger Super-Combo-Lazor-Beam Attack'!
IT'S SUPER EFFECTIVE!
ERROR 502 FAINTED!

>Celestia is about to call ERROR 504. Do you wish to escalate the Violence-O'-Meter?<

No []
Yes []
FUCK YES []
BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD! SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE!!! [X]

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Conversion bureau Celestia uses Error 504

It is ineffective!

Shepard-Harbinger uses 'Ah yes TCBCelestia, we have dismissed that claim'