Minuette has always had an acute sense for time. So when Starlight Glimmer's interference in the past starts rewriting history, Minuette is able to pull herself, along with Berry Punch, out of time for protection. Now stranded, sort of, Minuette offers her wife a rare chance to travel to any point in their pasts, saying they are free to go where they please as the timeline "works itself out", but they only have a few hours at best. Once time is fixed, Minuette's magic will fade and they'll need to get back to their own time.
But for Berry, that is more than enough time. There is one pony from her past that she would give almost anything to see again. She just isn't sure if that pony will want to see how Berry turned out, or if Berry can even face her.
(Teen because Berry and Minuette were kind of "busy" when it all started)
Your trying to give me cliffhanger syndrome, aren't you?
7299276 On the plus side, these chapters are short, which means I can update it much faster than my big stories. So it's not so much a cliffhanger, as it is a...short drop-hanger?
Damn it, how did I miss this? Seriously, how? Well, guess I have something else to read now, on top of the rather lengthy list of 'read later' and 'favorite' stories. Oh, and the school readings, I might have to do those at some point. Anyways, story seems interesting so far, looking forward to the rest. Until next time,
-Sphinx
Ps. Are you going to be finishing The Crown of the Sunken King? I'm just curious. I recently got into Darksouls and I thought of the story.
7660564 I'm not sure how you missed it, but I do admit I found it a bit odd that I hadn't heard from you on this one. You always comment on my stories, which does make me smile. Guess this means I better start working on this one again.
And I'll finish up The Sunken King now, too, since you asked. That one kind of fell off my radar, seeing as it wasn't drawing too much interest, but since you asked, I'll get it finished. Hope you enjoy Dark Souls. You're in for a treat--assuming the game doesn't kick you in the teeth. Blightown is usually the make or break point for a lot of players.
7663390 Are you saying you missed me? Ah, well that's nice, didn't know I meant so much to some people
. Anyways, good story, while I do love action-y stories, these more narrative/ emotional ones are always great. Just finished the second chapter, and I'll guess that ending up in a hospital wasn't a screw up. Really nice cliffhanger by the way.
On the note of Dark Souls, I have managed to pass Blightown, it was long, hard, and laggy, but I managed. Personally, I found Sen's Fortress to be more challenging. Well, until next time,
-Sphinx
robbed of
Nowhere
While that's an interesting way to spell it, I don't think that's her name.
Head?
Oh my goodness, a chapter! And a great chapter at that, and nice way of linking it to one of your previous ones. And poor Berry, hopefully Collie makes it back in time to get to know Berry's mother more. Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter, of which ever of your stories gets updated next. Well, until next time, which hopefully isn't going to be in too long,
-Sphinx
I believe Pinot Noir was Lauren Faust's favorite wine and her preferred name for the pony we call Berry Punch.
7945520 Bonus points awarded!!!