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Dreadnought


There is nothing as liberating, or terrifying, as a blank page.

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A concussion on her way to Ponyville leaves Air Heart with no memories. Now she has to struggle with a new job and a new home, while making new friends. Good thing her cousin Rainbow Dash is there to help. But Rainbow is a bit overprotective. Well, a lot overprotective.

Will she get her memories back? But the bigger question is will she want her memories back?
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Not related to any other stories I've written.
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Thanks to Calibra2 for the amazing cover art.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 15 )

7290985
Thanks for the feedback. I'm surprised as it's only been up a short time.

Dreadnought

7290997 no prob Bob. Also, will you be adding some random background characters? Like derpy or the doctor? Cuz u could add extra peoples OCS and stuff to ad to the story. You know? Just a thought

7291175
This is just the first chapter. The next chapter is longer and will introduce some OCs and background ponies. As for Derpy, you'll just have to wait and see.:raritywink:

Dreadnought

Well, a lot overprotective.

Dreadnought, on the description, you probably meant "Well, very overprotective." Right?

Cool first chapter. But what the heck was the beep?

7479306
An Electrocardiogram. Measure that your heart is beating.

7293490
Be on the lookout for some background ponies like Derpy and the Doctor.:pinkiehappy:

i smell a conspiracy

7498250
There's definitely something going on. What do you think is happening?

no clue not enufe info to make a guess but i wana guess DNA manipulation or cloning gone wrong but i doubt the seconed one

7293490
I hadn't heard anything on Derpy's appearance in Chapter 2. Did you like it?

Dreadnought

I haven't read much about the weather ponies. I didn't realize that there was so much to the job.

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