Now in slightly less than a happy mood, Scootaloo speeds through the streets of Ponyville searching for a certain Pink Party Pony. The filly finally reaches the sweet shop and hopes to herself that Pinkie is free to do something. Scootaloo removes her helmet and steps off of her scooter before making her way through the doors of Sugarcube Corner.
While walking up to the front desk, Scootaloo notices that the ceiling is lined with streamers, the floor is littered with confetti, and there are balloons floating around. Taking in the image, she walks up to the counter where she sees a fluffy pink tail sticking up over the counter.
“Hey Pinkie.”
The party pony comes out from under the table with a wide grin to greet the Pegasus filly.
“Hi Scootaloo! How are you today?!”
“I'm good. Extremely bored though. I wanted to see if you wanted to hang out?”
“Sorry Scootaloo! I gotta plan for a party I'm hosting this afternoon! Maybe another time! I still gotta hang more streamer, get more confetti, drag out my party cannon, and order the cake and–”
Pinkie's speedy speech is interrupted by a small orange hoof covering her muzzle.
“I get it Pinkie. Today's no good.”
Scootaloo removes her hoof and turns to walk away, her mood dampens even more.
“I'll see ya later Scootaloo! PINKIE PROMISE!”
“A-Alright then Pinkie. See ya.”
Without another word, the little filly hops back on her scooter, straps her helmet back on top of her head and buzzes off to the Everfree Forest.
Scootaloo is going to have a surprise birthday I'm calling it now unless she exepects that to happen but it doesn't mean spirited but it would be funny
7332592 You'll just have to wait and see
7332737 that's author yes that's going to happen but it's cliché so I'm scared to admit it
7332743 are you absolutely sure that it will happen?
7332774 I hope I'm wrong but if that does not happen it will be because of me
7334149 like I said, wait and see
It could need some fleshing out with a bit more description of the environment and the behaviour of the ponies. Goes a little too fast for me and I have the feeling I know how the rest will be playing out. It has potential though.
7336232 I'll admit it's not my best work. But in all honesty I couldn't think of anything else to write
Don't beat yourself up. I thought it was okay. While I am looking forward to more chapters, I have to say that this sounds like a repeat of "Party of One."