Once Starlight, Celestia and her friends left the dining hall, Twilight realized she had to find out the truth. She glared at Trixie and asked, "Trixie, I want to know something. Starlight and Celestia mentioned something about you putting a mind control spell on me, is that true?"
Trixie hung her head low and replied, "Yes Twilight, I did."
Twilight asked, "Why? You knew I already loved you before you cast that spell on me."
Trixie began to cry, "Because I wanted us to have a foal together and when I first talked to you about it, you said it would be wrong. I just wanted us to cement our love for one another."
Twilight sighed, "But that soon? Did you not trust me to stay true to you? Did you think that if you didn't have me under your control that I would throw you out?"
Trixie laid her head on the table and continued to sob, "Actually Twilight, yes, I was worried that if I didn't have you under my control that you would leave me. After all, Starlight left for Canterlot without even saying goodbye to me. She put her ambitions ahead of me and I didn't want to get hurt like that twice."
Twilight replied, "Trixie, I remember everything now. You were excited that Starlight was leaving. You were happy that it would just be us so please don't lie to me."
Trixie sighed, "Ok Twilight. I'll admit I was happy." She walked over to Twilight, hugged her and continued, "I guess I wanted us to have a foal together and be together forever so bad that I lost all rational thought. I'm so sorry Twilight, I do hope you can forgive me."
Twilight replied, "Well, I don't know Trixie. What you did to me was really bad, it is morally wrong, it is highly illegal...." Twilight began to cry, "But most of all it hurt my feelings. You didn't trust me enough to stay with you so you felt like you had to put a mind control spell on me."
Trixie began to cry, "Please forgive me Twilight. I do love you, I truly love you Twilight Sparkle." She buried her face in Twilight's mane and begged, "Please forgive me Twilight, I love you and want to be with you forever."
Twilight was watching her closely when she said this. She began to cry, "I love you too Trixie. I know what you did was wrong but I know that you won't do that to me again."
The two gazed into one another's eyes and began to kiss passionately. For the first time in months both mares felt true happiness. Once they broke the kiss Trixie asked, "Twilight, I know you are upset with everything that happened but I am wondering, can we still be marefriends?"
Twilight replied, "Well, I was kind of hoping that we could be more than just that."
Trixie gasped, "Do you mean?"
Twilight asked, "Trixie Lulamoon, while you have done bad things I will admit my love for you is strong. I am wondering if you would marry me!"
Trixie hugged her and squealed, "Yes Twilight, oh yes Twilight! I'll gladly marry you!"
The two began to kiss passionately again. Now that they knew that their destinies were each other, they felt like they were on top of the world and while they knew that nopony would approve of it, they weren't about to allow that to spoil this special moment. They truly realized their love for one another and were ready to cement it in matrimony.
An hour later they headed into the library. Twilight had her wing wrapped around Trixie and they both had smiles on their faces. When the others saw this, they all put their hooves over their faces in disgust. Twilight saw this and asked, "What's wrong everypony?"
Starlight asked, "Twilight, why do you have your wing around Trixie?"
Celestia added, "You do know that she will have to face charges for the crimes she has committed against you, don't......"
Twilight interrupted, "No, she won't because I do not wish to press charges against her and given that I am a princess, I would pardon her of everything anyway so don't waste your time with some kangaroo court trial."
While her friends, despite being disgusted by her decision, could understand where she was coming from. The same could not be said of the two princesses and Spike. Starlight sneered, "Oh and what are your plans now? Return to being marefriends? Twilight being willfully subservient to Trixie?"
Trixie joyfully replied, "We're going to get married!"
Everypony gasped, "What?"
Twilight replied, "You heard her, we're going to get married."
Applejack asked, "Are you sure about that sugar cube?"
Rarity added, "Come on darling, she controlled you for so long. You can do so much better."
Twilight sighed, "Look girls, could you just be happy for me? I don't expect any of you to support this but please at least respect my decision."
Celestia said, "Ok Twilight, we'll respect your decision. Given that this will be a royal wedding, it will be in Canterlot."
Starlight asked, "So are you going to want this to happen before or after the birth of your foal?"
Twilight replied, "I think it would be best if it happens before so our foal won't be born out of wedlock."
Celestia rolled her eyes in disgust, "So be it. We will get this set up as soon as possible. It likely won't be as grandiose as your brother and Cadence's was, but I will officiate it and make sure everything goes alright."
Twilight and Trixie cheered and began to kiss again. The princesses and her friends decided to just leave at that point. Twilight's friends just couldn't fathom how Twilight could still be so madly in love with Trixie, Celestia never imagined that the pony that was once her star student and had saved Equestria on multiple occasions would fall like this and Starlight, despite having had bad moments with her, never imagined that Twilight would fall for what she thought was Trixie's games. All that mattered to Twilight and Trixie though was that they had one another and that soon they would be married and have a royal foal.
To be concluded....
Why does this story "just" have an alternate universe tag?
7252905 What other tags do you feel it needs?
7252915 well just so other people can find in search bar when look for you story and character along with it
Those were two things that nopony had ever told Celestia and this angered her. She snapped, "What? Princess Twilight is under some sort of spell of Trixie's and she is pregnant and none of you ever bothered to tell me this?"
Starlight replied, "Well no. After I went to Ponyville and my friends and I went to check on her we discovered what was going on. I was going to tell you but then I got deeper into my studies, then the changelings attacked, then the unicorn army and I saved all of you and now taking control of the army made it skip my mind."
that sound like story waiting to be rewritten. that bother me with the story before this one. for one the dam Princess Twilight sparkle herself is knocked up, and because she under mind control she had no say in matter. and it slip your mind fuck you Starlight. for real how do you forget something like that. she has save the world how many times her being turn into a cumdump perfectly fine with you. this so fucked up that it funny
This is a terrible fanfic.
It started off well with a simple Starxie, but then you veered way, WAY off course and made half the characters so unlikable that I couldn't bring myself to finish this.
Honestly, I'm questioning if you even liked the characters to begin with.
7257187 For starters, I do like the characters. Regarding my change in direction, when I start a story, or a series, I never have the whole thing planned out in advance (well except Starlight's ascension here). The way I write actually depends a lot on my mood at the time of when I am writing, with the exception of gore fics as my mind is darker to start with. Regarding an end, "Saving Princess Twilight" ended the way it did because there obviously will be one more where Twilight and Trixie get married, they have a truly loving marriage, the royal foal will be born and everypony will reconcile. While Twilight may have seemed like what you call a "cumdump" for a while, once the relationship is true and the foal is born, I hope you'll change your mind on that.
Is being an assistant the ONLY thing Spike wanted to be?!?!!
7258508 Yep, that is all he wanted to be. He simply lost respect for Twilight when she became submissive to Trixie.
7258567 He could go to Ember if the situation finds his services are no longer required.
7257672 I hope I will. The mind control part did feel very out of left field though.
7258590 Don't worry, the last one will not involve any mind control or any extreme kinds of magic involved. Trixie has seen the error of her ways and like I said, everypony will reconcile. Now as far as Spike goes, I'm still torn between him going back to Twilight or having him stay with Starlight where he would likely have a more productive role.
7259041 Hmm, I see. I think I understand now. The whole thing here was because you kept getting ideas in as you were writing, and kept throwing them in. That's the most common pitfall of any story writer, adding new stuff to their story. So I understand, I've had the same issue myself, which actually led to me cancelling my own fanfic.
As for Spike, I'd love for him to be in a more productive setting.
7259660 Pretty much the only stories I didn't do that with was "Starlight Rising" and my newest story "Hidden Desires." While Starlight is going to have a very odd role as a princess (maintaining and monitoring the new military), Starlight will have him keep in touch with Celestia over the soldiers' progress, the expansion of recruiting, etc. while with Twilight I'm not sure what role he would have given that Twilight's number one priority will be taking care of her newborn.
sequel please!
7579389 It's in the works....it's almost done!
7579389 The sequel is up and ready to go. It is called "An Unlikely Union: A Princess and a Former Showmare"
7585621 Well nopony is perfect, not even my fave so that is why I gave her a personality that could wind up causing more problems than solving.
After you abandoned her for Twilight.
In an alternate timeline Trixie was arrested and put on trial because whether or not Twilight wanted to press charges didn’t matter due to the Princesses determining that Trixie has done too much to be set free without facing ramifications for her actions.
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I like that ending.
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Unfortunately it’s not the ending we have.
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Had I been thinking I would have had the other princesses overrule her. Celestia, Luna, Starlight and Cadence all would have overruled her. Damn why didn't I just do that instead?
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Not sure how to respond to that.
Saving Private Ryan - Equestrian Version.
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Given that the two of you are still active on the site, I will write an alternate ending to this story and then I'll write a story about Trixie going on trial for her crimes.
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You don’t have to.
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Well I've already started on the alternate ending and besides, I've been having a horrible time trying to get anything new up and running.
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Okay. But it really doesn’t make any difference to me. Just want that to be known.
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I’m cool with this happening. Twilight definitely needs to be cured of her Stockholm Syndrome.
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To each their own.
But I would be lying if I said I wasn’t curious about what he has in mind.
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Well there is one more story!
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You know looking back, I agree with you. The question is whether or not we’ll get the alternate ending.
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Ok, I am working on that alternate ending.
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No need to pressure the guy. Btw, have you seen any of my TwiStar content lately.
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I'm going to go check it out. Now as far as Trixie's punishment, that will be in a separate story. Right now Starlight is in the process of locking Trixie up in the dungeon in Canterlot. Now it is a known fact that Trixie is guilty of pretty much raping Twilight....so Celestia, Luna and Starlight will determine her final fate....and no she isn't going to get the Chrysalis treatment from Starlight.