Princess Dawn Twinkle spread harmony around along with her fellow bearers of the Elements of Friendship since she came to Ponyton. She heard the reports from the other princesses that something was wrong with the world, that in the distance a grey wave had been seen, a wave that shattered reality as it went and left an abyssal void behind. When she awakes after such a wave came at Ponyton, she is left wondering if it were real or a dream...and also why everything around town seems just a bit off.
And why do these ponies keep saying the word "twilight" among themselves whenever she goes by?
Cover art made using a few stills from the show, Pony Create v3 by generalzoi on DA, and Hasbro's official Cutie Mark creator...and pieced altogether using paint.NET.
This is cool! I will keep track of this
7235036
Many thanks. I'll be updating this as quickly as I can...dad duty gets in the way of, well...everything.
You have my attention.
Interesting beginning, I'm going to follow for future updates to this story. Looking forward to what happens next!
7235381
Thank you very much! Hope you continue to enjoy.
Two hooves up for this tale!
Wow, Dawn's got herself in some shit!
So tracking this, I wanna see where this is going.
So is this like a, last of an AU main 6 meeting this main 6?
Still now I'm curious.
OH CRAP!
You now have my full attention.
[judges story by its cover internally]
This is not as bad as I assumed it would be (from looking at the cover pic), but it certainly could be better
I belieb the word you be lookin' for is 'knowledgeable', but I suggest instead saying 'he knew so much about …'
This be missin' a 'not'
7241706
Thanks for catching those errors.
And when you say it could be better, to what do you refer? I can't expect to improve as a writer if I'm unaware of anything I'm doing wrong more than typos and the occasional missing word.
Update anytime soon?
7448491
I'm trying to write when time allows. This job is draining, still looking for other work, and that now the little one has mobility (and is pulling to stand), free time is increasingly scarce. I should have a chance to get some punched up this afternoon...hopefully.
7449290
Ah, okay. That I can understand.
Da-mn, boy. Choosing between your friend or your world...
"Ponyton"? Don't you mean Ponyville? (no, I haven't read the story yet)
7456167
No, Ponyton is correct.
Bravo, grand closing!
Good story.
Personally I would have preferred the other possible bittersweet ending
with Twilight killing Dawn, getting her memories and then living with the anguish
But this is okay.
I kind of wish there was an epilogue of
Discord calling out Dawn's bullshit in private but agreeing to keep it under wraps
7487166
Wouldn't be just Discord. With Luna having access to the dreamscape, there's no way she wouldn't know the truth.
This was an interesting story and I feel sorry for Dawn losing her realm. It's a shame they couldn't save either one and it's sad that Twilight died.
Good work, it was a good read, I read the whole thing from start to finish while at work during breaks.
I'm just wondering why she's fainting so much.
What? Is there a fainting spell going around?
8017098
Probably a side effect of being forcibly transported to a new world, where nothing is the same. It'd make anyone faint.
8022213 dude.
Naverone.
Antares.
Twilight.
Lyra.
Chronicles Sweetie.
Shall I go on?
Fainting is a Rarity thing. Not a normal thing.
8022728 Who or what are Naverone and Antares?
I'm just wondering what gods Dawn referred to?
Gotta love that happy ending 💕💕