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Beneath the microscope, you contain galaxies.

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Spike is trying to film My Little Pony: Season 3, but the Elements of Harmony keep fighting, and Celestia thinks she can arrive on set late just because she's a goddess. Not to mention the producer from Hell. You'd think he was trying to wreck the production.

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Fun fact: Spike was originally going to be played by Danny DeVito, but they decided he was too tall for the part.

Best pony is best pony.

100 deviantart points to the first reader who can figure out what the title of the production is on the clapboard in the picture. (Won by Path_of_cloud.)

"A large, bright-red earth with orange..."
Missing a word there? Otherwise a good job.:scootangel:

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Best story since Celestia Hates Tea. :rainbowkiss:

"Go to your damn spa and mud-wrestle each other if you have to."
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Lol funny cant wait for next chapter.

love the doctor horrible refernce
anyways, here's my read of this
http://youtu.be/2uON4X1RUvI

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This guy records one fanfic every day! He's done 156 so far.
Nice Big Mac voice. "Vertiginously" is a word. I'm just the first person ever to use it.

Incredible. Impossibly, irreversibly and borderline flavorful you were able to turn the whole story into a mish-mash mirror-verse and still maintain the chief humor. The story was a good, enjoyable read for its format and I have to say that the length is just right for a leisurely walk through relaxing literature. You managed to capture essence and reverse it surprisingly well, given the format you had chosen, and I have to say that you marvelously executed the fourth wall meta-discussion into the cast with much aplomb.

I usually have some negative points, but save for some minuscule character issues and the lack of an expanded base of character platforms and the unnaturally forced insertion of a Diablo 3 exchange, which itself was only two or three lines or so, there's nothing majorly bad about this; nothing substracts from my wholesome enjoyment of a quick read of this from the story enough to raise my ire. Good job.

I really, really don't get it, I can't find a story in it, I just read some events and some adult language..
What happened? What did they achieve?
Not to be rude but I don't feel like it is finished yet.

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It is finished. It doesn't have a traditional plot structure. It presents a strange and humorous situation, and then explains that situation by revealing who the producer is and what he's trying to accomplish.

Had me laughing my flank off so freaking hard :rainbowlaugh: You did PERFECT! I was seriously impressed by this awesome humor story and how nobody save for Spike and Discord was themselves, I loved this! Ha....Big mac acting like Twilight, I was rolling on the floor with tears in my eyes....Hahahahahahahaha:rainbowlaugh:

Celestia Over Equestria I believe is your production title. That or Celestia Cruel Equestria, the middle word is hard as fuck to read.

Also very funny. Loved the role reversal and swearing.

789071 Celestia Does Equestria

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Indeed! PM me with your deviantart username, if you have one, and I'll send you the coveted ONE... HUNDRED... POINTS! :pinkiehappy:
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(Worth about eighty U.S. cents.)

790949 Path0of0Cloud for the DA username. A PM seemed pointless everyone who wants to seems to find me anyways; I keep meaning to connect to connect the accounts.

Anyways, very cool. I'm surprised no one else had tried though. Also, thanks.

...what.

This is...

...:rainbowlaugh:

Quite funny. Although, the character swapping could have been a bit more tactically ironic and referential. Also, is it "Celestia Does Equestria"?

773026 I'm glad there's nothing majorly bad about it. What did you mean by "the lack of an expanded base of character platforms"? I haven't played Diablo 3, so now I'm curious what the Diablo 3 exchange is.

1162856 Yes, it's "Celestia Does Equestria". Congrats! But Path_of_cloud already won the points. What do you mean by "tactically ironic and referential"?

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Just a pretentious way of saying that I would have preferred some of the personality swaps to be different so that they make sense in a round about way.

I remember reading this. I don't know how to feel about it. Your 'story style' and your 'personal style' seem to be wildly divergent. (Or maybe I just haven't read any of your really old blog-stuff.)

2400388 If the story didn't make you laugh, it failed. I don't think I have a story style.

2401008 Good news there: I distinctly recall *snerk*-ing back when I read it. It's not "stick-in-your-mind" memorable, but it is "let's see here, what is... oh hey, I remember that one! It kinda sucked." memorable. (Which is not to make a judgment on the story by phrasing it that way, although that happens to be accurate to my feelings about it.)

I can't really contest that. Your blog/comment style (from what I can tell) is friendly, confoundingly reasonable, cool-uncle "hey look at this neat thing you can do with computers and SCIENCE!" For your writing style, however, I basically only have this, Severious Spike (which, as a writing experiment apeing another's style, doesn't quite count), and Pony Tales to work with -- a distressingly small sample size. FWIW I liked Pony Tales the best (with the approximate exception of the poem one, but I can chalk that up to "I'm just not that into poetry").

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This is amazing. My only complaint is that it is too short. I would have loved it if you made a humongous story out of this, it would be the best comedy piece on this site.

I have but one last thing to say to you, my good sir:
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I see what you did with the chapter title :pinkiehappy:

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