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Thunderlane helps Lightning Dust get her life back on track while she struggles with drug addiction, mental illnesses, a personality disorder, and her own dark past. Inspired by songs written by Stone Temple Pilots. Thunder X Lightning slow burn fic.
The heartwarming story about a young couple's first time together. Well, the mare is actually a disguised changeling princess preparing to gain enough love to enact her plans to take over large parts of Equestria. That might be important.
No. The reason for her being a babysitter is because it is suppose to be canon, and it was a decent segway to connect her to Thunderlane. I morally disagree with foalcon, and I don't plan on writing characters that are underage.
Not bad, not bad at all for a first try. The only problems I saw were a few cases of missing words. The Grammar itself was very well done, pacing was alright, and you didn't use repetitive adjectives.
Keep up the good work, lad. You'll go far at this rate.
Any story with flitter and cloudchaser is awesome
Kinky. I like. Write more. ~hug
If there is another story after this, will it be Flitter going to babysit Rumble and them doing something naughty?
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No. The reason for her being a babysitter is because it is suppose to be canon, and it was a decent segway to connect her to Thunderlane. I morally disagree with foalcon, and I don't plan on writing characters that are underage.
Not bad, not bad at all for a first try. The only problems I saw were a few cases of missing words. The Grammar itself was very well done, pacing was alright, and you didn't use repetitive adjectives.
Keep up the good work, lad. You'll go far at this rate.
7210376 well i can understand your morals, but will there be something with flitter and thunderlane?
7210578 Indeed.
7210736 Well sorry for saying what i did, and i look forward to the next installment.