EldinKaiser
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I'm guessing that colt was Feather Weight.
7205059 Yes. Yes it was.
I read this, and I made a thing. Can I show you the thing?
7205228 of course
Good story. It kept my interest glued to it throughout.
May I make a suggestion for a quick edit rewrite? After the BOOM, have several lines of dots, simulating a long pause, the type in the words "Damnit... I missed!" That will leave the readers wondering... as they should be.
7205360 Ok...yeah, you're right. That would add a sense of mystery and leaves open so many opportunities.
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Or add a twist with Octavia screaming "VINYL SCRATCH!!!"
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all of you are making me want to write a sequel to something that's not supposed to have a sequel. xD
Excellent story in my opinion. Great work!
7205512 thank you so much ^^
7205500 Never forget...you are the author.
You can control the vertical.
You can control the horizontal.
You can turn the focus to a soft blur,
Or sharpen it to crystal clarity.
ETC<<<ETC<<<ETC<<<
Above all, YOU and YOU alone get to decide if there will be a sequel or not.
Enjoy the Power! LOL.
7205569 I dunno why, but as I read your comment. I ended up reading it in the typical old sensei voice. xD but yeah, I know. Like I said, it's not meant to be a sequel. But when I get suggestions, I just kind of start imagining it and want to write it, but where I'm usually a romance writer, I want to try something new.... BUT I HAVE AN AMAZING IDEA! Wait for a couple of days or follow me, either or, and I'll have something amazing to go along with this.
7205590 LMAO... Sensei voice? First time I've been referred to as that, though I don't suppose that's very far from the truth. Actually, I was paraphrasing the opening to an old TV series called the Outer Limits.
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You don't have to make the sequel, I already did. With your permission, can I post it?
7205758 go for it! ^^
7205758 can't wait to read a sequel. I love this story
7205758 I'd love to read that!
Link, please, once you post it?
7207147 Wait, ain't you the same guy who faved this on my deviantart?
7207312 Yep, that would be me.
And I'm a gal, actually.
Don't worry about it, though. I get that a lot.
Must be my username.
7207389 ahhh, sorry about that ^^;;;;
7207714 That's okay. Like I said, it happens to me all the time. It's no big thing.
7205663 I'd like to apologize for my previous comment, at the time of posting that I was kind of blazed and that's why I said you sounded like a sensei voice in my head while reading that.
7250530 No problem. I didn't take the comment personally. I consider critiquing these stories as a way of sharing knowledge and experience, which everyone, especially myself, could profit from.
wow, just wow that was amazing the writing was so well put together