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DinKaiser


Just a guy who loves to write!

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This story is a sequel to Red String of Fate


Ok, by now, I believe a few of my readers have paid attention to what I'm doing. If not, just think of it like this. Everything fits together in some slot, but all the pieces are not there.

Ok! About this. There is going to be a follow up to this, probably posted within the next day or two, but to explain what I can. Sunset feels upset and feels that Twilight is neglecting their relationship. Though on the other hand, things are completely different.

Also, I just got done editing this at 5 in the morning. I believe I got all grammatical errors, but if anyone may see one, please tell me. Thank you

Rated T
Language and Adult Situations

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Comments ( 12 )

I have to ask... Sunset is in a relationship with Sci-Twi :yay: or the pony princess :facehoof: ?

7412005 Pony princess. Though I'm considering writing a sci Twi and actual human Sunset. Kinda have the plot of Human Sunset meets Sci Twi.

Great sequel bro! I think you are my big inspiration for the story I'm making! :pinkiehappy:
I was thinking of a Sci-Twi and pony Sunset and Princess Twilight with human sunset in the story.

7413048 I'm actually at a loss for words. I've never actually had someone say that I've inspired them to do anything xD though like the concept you have ^^ Are you more of a Sci-Twi x Sunset(pony) shipper?

7413559 You could say that... I kinda like shipping them as much as I want to ship pony Twilight with the human Sunset, so, kinda on a 50/50 scale.

I loved this story. Keep up the amazing job you do with SunLight.

That was pretty good. Keep it going.

Overall both this and the prequel are good stories, but I think sunset is a bit off here. She feels a bit to sensitive and not as strong willed as she seems to be in the movies.
Still a nice read though :twilightsmile:

1 year is a short time limit.

7697070 Anymore, in today's society, waiting a year to be engaged is waiting a long time. Especially when I see people getting engaged and married within like 6 months of knowing each other. Though I understand where you're coming from, I was kind of trying to play it off as in they were talking for several months prior to dating, though I neglected to state that and for the negligence I'd like to apologize.

Awesome story, but I have to ask, are they actually engaged or is that what you called being girlfriends?

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