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Bantam
I draw and write things of suggestible nature.
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*<>* nice work .... Very hot almost overheated ....
~ feels a lil rushed towards the end ... Other than that we look forward to more ... Have a star and follow
hopefully next fic featuring our wifu AJ in the orchard ...
7208253 Thanks so much! It's possible the end was rushed a bit due to my being aware of how long in the tooth the chapter was already getting. I almost cut the train scene to allow for a longer finale, but couldn't quite bring myself to! Hopefully I can pace myself better next time around!
7208589 *<>* never sacrifice story elements or clop because you think it's to long ... Pacing is key ..
So will be stories with mares other than the main six.
7208758 There will be! I'll probably be completing chapters for the Mane 6 first, but I have plans to cover at least a few other characters afterwards!
7208782 can you cover some of the lesser know characters.
7208788 I'm certainly open to the idea! Any requests?
Ze Doktor is pleased with zis story... Twilight or Fluttershy next please, too amazing 10/10 dead zombies, perfect story.
A really well written chapter, loved how in character you kept Rarity, being the ever graceful lady.
I am loving this
My only complaint is that it gets a little wall-o-text-y a lot. Try breaking up some of those larger paragraphs. Some of them could be three or four.
Maybe Spitfire, they could meet at a bar? Cheerilee maybe picking up Scoots or someone from school? Lyra at the sweets shop? Octavia from a concert? Bon Bon, you are mistaken as her objective(since she's a spy or whatever?). Princess Luna because she's awesome? Those are just some ideas. You don't have to use them and yes I've realized I said way to much. XD
Color me impressed...enough said.
Aj might be a good choice next
7517993 You're in luck, because it's looking like AJ will be next, followed by Fluttershy! The order from there is still a bit in the air.
7523535 I think you should do RD after Aj, Pinks, then Twi to finish off the mane six (just a suggestion
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I hope there's more to come soon.
Good god this story. Keep up the good work.
Oh please, tell me this is going to continue. That chapter was great. Also, the sooner you get to a Fluttershy chapter, the better imo.
Amazing read! Quite nicely detailed! Hope you write stories for the others!!
Their been no updates for so long, so 👎.
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Took a few years, but your wish is granted!
*<>* that was so hot i blew my radiator cap ...
~Hopefully this series will continue updating consistantly instead of 3 yr wait before progress
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took u some time eh?
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Worked on it a little every blue moon between a lot of other writing projects, some pony, which I’ll eventually try to rework for fimfiction. Then delayed a bit longer after finishing as I decided to edit the language for more of the mood I wanted. Applejack’s is at around 4K words right now, and I’ll try to not take so long on hers.
Loved every second of it. And not just because fluttershy is my fave of the main 6.
Just please don't wait another 3 years to do the next chapter.
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I’ll try my best!
OwO UwU OwO
Wow.
Nine days ago, new chapter.
Nine days ago till yesterday, been in a hospital.
. . . Feck it.
Really nice stuff here! The dynamics between the two felt pretty spot-on.
I would really like to see Twilight next, or in the foreseeable future... She is my favourite and I love reading good stories with her.
I guess this story's dead. Dang, I was really enjoying these.